| "Time, Fault and Out" Reviews/Comments [ 101 ] |
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Reviewed By: AvEry On: April 17, 2006 18:08 EDT
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Okay, being that murder is illegal just about everywhere, is there any chance of sometime of catastrophic event that can occur that can destroy a certain 'pink cow'? Relena single handedly destroyed a life - poor, poor, Taurus - and may have robbed another of his future. I have to tell you this, I can't wait til the next chapter when Duo gets to the hospital. Relena'll be lucky she's already in a medical facility! Although this chapter was so very sad, I was happy to see the spark between Treize and Zechs. I so love those two together. Anyway, I digress, good luck with the next chapter and thank you for getting this one out so fast. Hopefully, the next one will be upon us just as quickly. ^_^
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Title: Time, Fault, and out
Reviewed By: Noraniza On: April 17, 2006 14:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAArrrrgggghhhh, i'm gona kill that pink bitch,...*glare-at-said-pink-bitch*.....she is one veeerrryyy annoying brat, and i hope Duo will give kick her pink ass good and hard when he arrive at the hospital,...*evil-smirk*...
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Reviewed By: Misslady (not signed in) On: April 17, 2006 13:37 EDT
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Okay so much angst. My heart is pounding!! Is Heero going to be ok? Is Duo going to kill Relena? Poor Taurus!! Poor Treize!! Relena should stay away from horses. Please update soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Sayo~chan On: April 17, 2006 11:51 EDT
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omg! you cannot be serious!! ::sobs:: if you make Heero have amnesia and fall in love with Relena, i will never forgive you! lol j/k keep up the good work i love the story so far!
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Reviewed By: subzerotwin13 On: April 16, 2006 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, my god. i so hope that Heero is ok.Man i almost started to cry. i knew that Relena is not a good person, since a horse knows better in judgement. God i hope that Duo will be ok too. oh please update soon, i can not wait to read what happens
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Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: April 15, 2006 12:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god.....shit is gonna hit the fan. i'm, so, not moving from this spot until you update. keep up the fabulous work.
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Title: Time, Fault Out
Reviewed By: tataliny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. However, I would have to strangle Relena. I think this give Heero the perfect opp. to kick the pink harpy out. I can't believe that Heero was thrown into the road. Please update soon. I mean that kind of ending has to be taken care of quick. Please don't leave us in suspense. Update, Update, update. Thanks Tata
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Title: Time, Fault Out
Reviewed By: tataliny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. However, I would have to strangle Relena. I think this give Heero the perfect opp. to kick the pink harpy out. I can't believe that Heero was thrown into the road. Please update soon. I mean that kind of ending has to be taken care of quick. Please don't leave us in suspense. Update, Update, update. Thanks Tata
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Title: AUGH NO HEERO!!!
Reviewed By: Misslady (not signed in) On: April 13, 2006 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK What a cliffhanger!! All three guys are going to kill Relena!! Please keep up the wonderful work and update soon!! Your stories are truly wonderful!! Misslady
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Reviewed By: Myra77 On: April 13, 2006 17:39 EDT
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Oh, my... *chews at her nails* What's happened to Heero? That landing is surely going to land him in the hospital. Relena better watch out, because once Duo finds out she was the cause of this mess, she's in for a true scare. *grins* Gotta love that. Anyway, hope to see more of this wonderful story soon!
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Title: AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!
Reviewed By: ShinigamiGirl [not logged on] On: April 13, 2006 15:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, no, no! *stops foot like a spoiled child* You can't leave it there! Not nice! Please update soon for my sanities sake!
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Reviewed By: SMO [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 13:35 EDT
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Another great chapter. I'm glad that Zechs is back in the story. I hope that Heero isn't to badly hurt (and that Taurus is ok as well). Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (who feels slightly stupid) On: April 11, 2006 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Smacks forehead* reserve a table for 8 menaing 8 PM. Getting ready for finals is sucking out my brains. On the otherhand I am so happy to see that Zechs is back. Are we going to get any 13x6 action? The fifth hoof twist was very cool.
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (who's too lazy to sign in) On: March 31, 2006 14:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Happy days for Heero. Wondering about the table for 8... is Treize bringing a date?
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Title: Time Fault and Out
Reviewed By: Noraniza On: March 26, 2006 19:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, how much more annoying can that pink bitch get ne?? it's almost a shame that Zero only step on her foot, he should just shove her off with his hoofs i tell ya,...*shakes-head*...
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