| "In the Sweet Tears of Anguish... the Melia Flower" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 13:57 CST
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Wow!! That chapter absolutely rocked! Thanks for the nice, LONG chapter. Love Hiei and Kagome getting to know each other's story. And Hiei's thoughts were so revealing. You did such a great job with them. And what an awesome ending! we've got to wonder how he did what he did without Hiei sensing him. And who is the mysterious Lord Si...? And Inuyasha betraying Kagome for Kikyou even in hell -- wicked. Can't wait for more of this excellent fic!! Looking forward to Kagome and Hiei bonding in more ways as their friendship (even though he doesn't have friends) grows and feelings develop. Poor Kagome -- thinks she'll be alone forever, even when she's linked to a hot demon. That would be sad indeed. Fabulous job!! More, MORE!!
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 02:53 CST
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So Uber cool! You must update soon!
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Reviewed By: Azera_Vader [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 22:23 CST
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This is so very great! Can't wait for the update, I just love it when Sesshomaru is so protective of Kagome! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: CrossoverQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I'm really loving this. Yoou simply MUST update!
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Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the twist! At first I thought it was going to be InuYasha over Kagome. Having Kagome have a little emotional scarring from her past experiences is a good plot line; just try not to let her get too wimpy. (You haven't yet so don't worry!) I want to know how the first conversation between Hiei, Kagome, and Shippo goes. And how can Shippo still be a little kit? I can't wait to read more. Update soon please!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kool, update again soon
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 20:16 CST
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Yo, I've missed like three updates!? When did this happen?!?!?!?!?!?!?! lol, been berri busy! update soon!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 17:59 CST
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YaY!!!! I like what's happening *devilish grin*. Please update when yas get teh chance ;3
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 16:42 CST
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Lol. Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 16:03 CST
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Shippo is still a young kid? Kurama/Kagome/Hiei, the three were made for each other. Did Sesshomaru have another alternative motive for linking Kagome and Hiei together. Did Koenma knew that he would be facing Sesshomaru and Rin's raft if they find out he wants Kagome in the SD team? How bad was it that he would risk his life to get Kagome? If his father knew about it, how would he react or would he even care? Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 15:15 CST
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Evil place to leave off!! I'm so happy that I got to read a new chapter -- yay!! And it was a great one! Loved Hiei's reaction to having his life linked to her -- it was a good plan, .. just one problem, ... it involved him. Priceless! And how great was it when Youko told him to not be him? LOL! I'm looking forward to the upcoming conversation between Kagome and Hiei. Also, will there be any unexpected results of the bond between them? It's obvious they're already attracted to each other. (Oh! I do so love a good Hiei/Kagome fic!!) Can't wait for someone else to ask her out and him to flip. And, it sounds like Koenma must have had a special reason for wanting her as a member of the team -- a particular evil to be faced? And of course, the YYH gang will have to find out all about her impressive past. And deal with her having a son -- Hiei first. Heh heh! I really loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one!! Thanks for updating faithfully! (More -- SOON -- please!)
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Reviewed By: Temari92 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 15:00 CST
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YAY!! U updated!! Please update soon!! I really do love ur story!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I love this please update soon
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Reviewed By: Temari92 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 18:02 CST
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Hey Please update!! I love ur story!!
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