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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story has spark. It's a wonderful story, do update. I have one question thou, why do you insist on writing other stories when you haven't finish the rest. yes, it's me, the pesty kagome313, that loves the stories that kipu writes,but hate that he isn't updating the ones she mostly LOVE......It Hard To Hate A Hanyou and Jst Rommies Hurry and start working on them, and if it's too much pressure, then Stop having so many stories that aren't completed, and if your out of idea, then gave an author's note or something! and again, i love your story, no not story, STORIES
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P On: December 19, 2005 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it,please update.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK(not signed in) On: December 16, 2005 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, I love this story. Wasn't Kagura one of the girls Kagome met? Well anyways, I cant wait for the next update!!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: HERE I GO AGAIN
Reviewed By: ssc [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 03:40 CST
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Don't know why i review again, it seems like i'm the only one with just nothing to do than to stay alert for any updates... jeje too much free time i guess... anyway... this story is really great (but i'm waiting..stil.. for an update of just rommies..) I hope you get into action in this story for the next chapters... can't wait wich twist you're gonna put in this story and how you are gonna explore and transform inuyasha's personality from cruel to caring... And just something i must say... i got so happy when kagome mentions that she was not saint kagome (i'm fond with the image of an innocent kagome, but i guess it wiuld be more interesting if you can introduce an innocent... but not dumb girl... jeje i don't know if you get me... she can know how they play, maybe follow the flow but put a wise tirn when the situation comes) well must shut up... you're the author and i love your work... Keep on updating... hope you're ok
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Title: keep with the good work!!
Reviewed By: ssc [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 15:56 CST
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I'm just amazed by yor story, it's a great adaptation of cruel intentions (i presume)... i just hate how you portarit inu's character (but it's part of the plort i now, such a vile and empty person)... i can`t wait to read more of it, really great job!!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 03:14 CST
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LOVED IT!!! Continue please... ;-)
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kipu, hey I LOVEd this update. It's okay it wa short, I'm glad they'll graduallt get longer though. Great update, and story, I love it by the way, and I can't wait for the next. Good work writing... :-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva NSI On: November 28, 2005 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again gurl i love this
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Reviewed By: loveywhite110 On: November 28, 2005 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! love the story so far you make it interestin. cant wait till the next chap iz out ~lovely~
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: November 28, 2005 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate Inuyasha! He's such a jerk! I can tell just by the first chapter (which is all I've had time to read) But I'm lovin' it and can't wait for stupid sociology to end so I can come back and read more ^_^ Keep up the lovely work! always - Anubis
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Title: Good one!!!
Reviewed By: kagss On: November 27, 2005 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this one it's so appeling!!! But i have one question, you're starting two more fics, does that means you are leaving just roomies, i just adore that one, and i'm looking forward for those next chapters..
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it it's so damn original!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great new story so far, I hope you update soon,and keep this up! ;-)
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Reviewed By: x_paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds great so far :] no plot has developed yet (of course XD) but it sounds fun :] I wanna see inu's face when he realizes how pretty kag is! XD Can't wait! :]
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Reviewed By: sweetdreams03 On: November 25, 2005 10:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story has got a great start but it was kind of short than i would have liked. If you keep going this story maybe really good!
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