| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] |
| Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
Title: chap 66
Reviewed By: venus legacy (not logged) On: June 18, 2007 15:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
The talk surprised me I think I had the same reaction as Trunks, but at the same time I'm in awe at how accepting Vegeta is of the situation and why shouldn't he be , he only wants the best for his children, his family's happiness is his concern. I guess I was mainly worried that Vegeta would express anxiety over the situation because of what happened between himself and Goku, and that he might be more than concerned especially if their relationship develops more sexually. And I understand Vegeta's concerns for Bra, that is going to be so sad when she finds out. I guess with the woods reference I thought at first that Vegeta was suggesting a trip for all of them out into the woods, lol I misunderstood that, it would be weird leavin a newborn on their own, but it would be exciting if they had a camping out trip, sort of like what they had at the cave but on a different level. I thought Goku's reflection on Goten and Trunks' relationship was interesting, quite ironic as well, considering how close Trunks and Goten really are, that he would wish for what they had, although he doesn't know the depth of what he is really wishing for, that request must have made Vegeta blush lol. I wonder what will happen in the next chap, you said the twins will have grown quite a lot, so is it gonna be in 6 months time?
|
Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 12:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
""Stay asleep," he instructed in a warning tone. The infant's tail swished happily at the direct attention." lol That coming-out went smoothly. I'm wondering how Bulma, Goku, and Chichi will feel though when they eventually find out that Vegeta was told and they weren't (assuming they continue to keep the relationship secret). So we're skipping ahead 6 months, great! I look forward to the change of scenery. It's a good place for some movement- I think you've done everything you can with the babies and the characters at the point of time they're in now. I guess next time we see the babies they'll be walking and talking (or is that too soon?), and already I'm busy wondering if they'll all still be at Capsule Corp, if Goten and Trunks' relationship will still be going so well- so many questions...
|
Title: Chapter 66
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: June 17, 2007 17:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Once again the babies are adorable with their parents. I too am nervous about how Chichi will react once she hears about Trunks and Goten's relationship. She might yell and scream, she might have silent anger, or she might even faint as she tends to do a lot when she's shocked about something. Now that the babies are getting older, I'm interested in seeing what their personalities will be like. I'm sure they'll still be adorable. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: lovecoma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 11:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, another chapter! And it was a very good one, too. I agree with fyrbyrd's comment though. Lately I've really been feeling sad for Goku. He always seems so in the dark about everything and it's so obvious he's happy with things as they stand now and Vegeta and Chichi can't wait to have him back at his old house. :( I look forward to seeing the babies older, though!
|
Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: June 17, 2007 08:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
When you started writing this I like Chichi in it. I'm losing that now, and I feel sad for Goku a lot lately too. But still I won't stop reading this.
|
Title: Anothe Excellent Chapter
Reviewed By: Princess Koriandr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 23:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Man, I'm almost cringing thinking about Chi Chi's reaction. I have visions of stuff being thrown and ears bleeding. I can't wait for the next chapter!
|
Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: June 11, 2007 09:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Love this chapter. I wonder how Vegeta will respond in that talk with Trunks. The little ones are growing fast too. They will be able to sleep by themselves soon. Chichi cant wait to get out of there. lol Keep it coming.
|
Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 13:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
gods girl...the story gets better and better :P thank you so much for writhing this *bows respectfully* Please update soon! me needs the father-son talk..sorry..can't help but being curious about it :P Well...keep the spirits (and the story) up and I'll love you even more then I already do! Love EV
|
Reviewed By: lovecoma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 19:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
Urg. I meant "jells", not "jars", which implies quite the opposite of what I meant. I meant, I think you do an awesome job of writing a well charactered Vegeta but because I'm a dummy and not thinking straight...yeah. Sorry. Great chapter! :D
|
Reviewed By: lovecoma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 19:30 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aw! That was a great chapter! I had just been wondering if there'd be a new one soon and BOOM! I logged on this morning to do a quick email check before going to work and had a auto-notice! How exciting. :D I'm really starting to like the Chichi/Vegeta interactions, seeing Vegeta through Chichi's eyes. And it's always sweet seeing Vegeta interact with the young'ns. I feel sorry for poor Goku though. I'd feel kinda useless if I were him. Little Vejita cries for his daddy (excuse me, pappa), both kids seem only to rely on him for food, and poor Goku doesn't really seem in on to many decisions either. And though I'm pretty sure I've said it before, I must reiterate, I LOVE the way you write Vegeta. I'm currently buying the new released dvd season sets and watching them all in the original Japanese (a first time for me on most of the episodes) and your characterization really jars with what is presented there, if he were given time to age and change (as he has in your story) and I just wanted to give you props on that. :D Wonderful chapter; hope you find time to do another very soon!
|
Title: ch65
Reviewed By: venuslegacy (not logged) On: June 01, 2007 16:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
That was a really sweet moment that Trunks and Vegeta shared, its nice to see them have father and son bonding time, I can't wait to see how the following day plans out, especially since Trunks plans to tell his father about his new relationship.
|
Title: ch64
Reviewed By: venus legacy (not logged in) On: June 01, 2007 15:54 PDT
Comment/Review:
I also think its really adorable the way you portray Trunks, I find it cute the way he blushes and gets bashful when ever Goten is quite "vulgar" lol as Trunks likes to call it. But then sometimes you show Trunks comin out of his shell more, and sometimes he is the one who takes the initiative, which is cool, especially when he says things like "that's kinda kinky" I was like oh my gosh did I read that right lol. Trunks seems kinda restrained, especially before, when it comes to relationship matters, its great that he is able to open himself up more when it comes to Goten. It is definitely true companionship between the two.
|
Title: ch64
Reviewed By: venus legacy (notllogged) On: June 01, 2007 15:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow the way you depicted the smouldering chemistry between t and g was brilliant. lol I was floored when chi cand vegeta agreed with each other :"Vegeta and Chi Chi could not help but share a mutual look of disgust" I think they make a good team when they are with each other instead of against each other. I'm worried about what's in store, especially with the ominous thunder and rain. The twins haven't been taken to the woods yet, and Bulma seems to be getting anxious about the situation.
|
Title: ch63
Reviewed By: venus legacy(notlogged) On: June 01, 2007 13:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
aww it's sweet that trunks and goten are going on a romantic date, it doesn't seem to be jeopardsizing they're friendship as well, if anything it is making it even richer. Although its sad that Bulma and Vegeta are not able to have as much quality time due to the sleeping habits of the twins I worry a bit at what Vegeta has in mind when he says that the twins should learn to be independent and content without being constantly in his arms. And what does he mean about ending the 'happy family' routine? Is he referring only to the sleeping arrangements, or the entire living situation? I wonder what exactly Vegeta wishes to change. And I can't wait to see what happens on the twins excursion to the woods, I wonder what tests he has in store for them and how it will affect the family unit.
|
Title: Chapter 65
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: June 01, 2007 12:30 PDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I especially loved the scene when little Vejita smiled up a his parents so cutely. I love any interaction the twins have with their parents. It's all too cute! Looking forward to the next chapter as always!
|
| Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
