| "When You Least Expect" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: EvilGotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!! (BEgins to rip hair out of his head) THIS FIC IS GREAT!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: masamune On: May 12, 2002 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO! i can't believe bulma was going to just give up like that! i mean, she had kept saying those mean things about it being rape, and was just about to give herself up again!!! eeekk!! oh, and by the way, EXCELLENT chapter, i like your style. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 12, 2002 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, Veggie can be such an ass sometimes. I know things will work out in the end for both of them, but for now I think Freeza has begun his attack. Good chapter. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo great!! I mean it! WOW! Please please please please update really soon!! I can't wait to read what happens next! hehehe..I love the plot and events that are taking place..haha poor Vegeta! ^^ Cyaz later! buh bye~ |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>font color="red">This is sooooo great!! I mean it! WOW! Please please please please update really soon!! I can't wait to read what happens next! hehehe..I love the plot and events that are taking place..haha poor Vegeta! ^^ Cyaz later! buh bye~ |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 17:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness. What was that? "That" wasn't very nice, it was a very mean, in its own kind of cliffhanger-ness way. Isn't Seventeen & Eighteen related? I forget. Um...sorry? Can't wait to the next update. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 22, 2002 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap and lemon. After what happened between those two I doubt Bulma wants to be rescued ^_^. |
Reviewed By: yume On: July 28, 2002 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow~ I can't wait to read chpt 18~~~~!! Please update soon!!! Great fanfic btw~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 11, 2002 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLLOL!! I guess that since Bulma is sooooooooo repulsive, Veggie wants to screw her brains out!! I'm glad that ChiChi broke it off with Baron Sh*thead, even though he's not taking no for an answer. CC and Kakarott belong together forever. Hercule can take his Hand in marriage (^_~). Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: Bulma Goddess On: March 24, 2002 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luvvin the fic plz get the next chapter up soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 22, 2002 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOL!! Rules 1, 2, and 3 were the same old shit. Bulma should've asked 18 to put it in writing just to piss her off. So B/V kissed. He's done. I don't care how much he fights this, Veggie has definitely missed the last train out of town (^_^). Write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2002 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
(looks around) Who? Me? Come on! You updated too fast! lol, J/K of course! I love fast updates!
Ew, so things are heating up between Bulma and Vegeta and Vegeta wants to take some cold showers? evil lol Right. Whatever. Like the only thing that can keep things from heating up further is Frieza. lol (pun intended, and it was a good one too)
BTW, DOY is again being halved. I'm halving the half, I might even have to half the half of the half. lol, it should be out tonight or early tommorrw. I've been working non-stop on it...except for reading fics and going slowmo on The Long Awaited Fight...Ouch! I didn't even know you could do that with a knee! lol
Anyways, bring in that thing you promised me in the email I just read... lol me and my email. (shakes head) Pitiful.
So, what's going on with ChiChi and Hercule? lol Or do I want to know? How close is Kakarott to getting Bulma back? Where's Marron? Will you kill her? lol Will 18 find her brother? Oh, so many questions! I hope you answer them! ;) I know you will. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 07:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the dedication and for writing another chapter. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2002 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're right: Vegeta's mind is only understandable to Vegeta. I should know. Look at the name. (Laughs to himself) |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 15, 2002 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ths is great. I like it. Keep up the good work and please write more chapters. |
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