| "Just Another Story" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 19:45 CDT
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this was a great story, now i'm off to read the sequel.
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Reviewed By: VB On: January 13, 2007 20:32 CST
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Just so you know I still hate you. Both of these fics you leave with such dreaded evil cliffhangers (okay so this one's not all that bad, but after the other one with Kagome going off to protect Souta and Hiei racing to save his mate and child I have no patince for this evil.) *drags Miroku over* Miroku shall be purifying your evil cliffhangers so you'd better update soon before he ends up purifying Hiei. (Course I'd have to kill Miroku but that ain't the point.) UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEAAAAASE!!! FOR THE SAKE OF MY SANITY!!
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Reviewed By: ME On: January 13, 2007 19:39 CST
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How is Yusuke older if Kagome is from his father's first family?
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Reviewed By: armybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think they should stay at the temple..... also Hurry and update thank u ^^
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Hieis_soulmateis_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! I think that Dachi and Susake should live at the temple and have the gang be their family. I also like the second scenario with Sango, and that Kagome should kill Kikyo to save her best friend. However, whatever you decide, I know that it will be for the best intentions of the story, and that I'm going to enjoy reading it. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 05:34 CST
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Great chap. I like the idea of doing it in sepreat stories I think the kids should stay with them. And i think that Sango should be herself so that she can explain what the hell is going on the her. Well keep up the great work. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 15:49 CST
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Oh Wow! Loved it!! Fantastic chapter! You did so much in it. Loved Hiei and Kagome's interaction and his thoughts about her. Really loved her answer to Yusuke's question, too. Very interesting. So, did hiei agree with her answer, or was he just not liking her "dog pack" analogy? What to do with the kids -- they should probably stay at the temple. Sango meeting up with Kagome -- I really don't know what would be better -- can't wait to see what you decide, though. Please, MORE Hiei/Kagome stuff! (BTW, is he sleeping in her room? Just wondering if you're going to have any scenes where his having to stay near her causes problems or embarrassment for them. Bathing, etc.?) Love Kurama's formality with her. I just can't wait for your next chapter!! Hope you get a chance to write more this week!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 13:42 CST
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I really loved it! Update asap please!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 01:24 CST
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Whew! It's getting pretty angsty. What an ominous message Sango is sending Kagome. Yeah, I'd love for the next chapter to get back to her and the YYH gang. (Especially her and Hiei!) Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 01:51 CST
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Had to read it agian! Love this story! Hope you enjoy the holidays and that you come back to wtiting soon!!
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Plus this story sounds like to going to be fantastic, so PLEASE UPDATE as SOON as you can.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol That is so wrong Koenma dose not get Kirara.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess the story is ok there are way to many Hiei and Kagome pairing well atleast the story doesn`t have a gay pairing meaning a male with another male and what is with this pairing Hiei and Kagome why cann`t she paired up with one of the other guys oh well
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far, even if you do make Kagome the usual X-over cliche "super-powerful-all-knowing" but it's okay, as long as it's not too much lol.
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Reviewed By: Youshie On: October 22, 2006 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, I really really hope that you continue to write in it. i like the hiei kagome thing. Will kagome go back to the futile era? I think this will be a great story thank you for writing it and please continue to write this story. Thank you. -Youshie
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