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Reviewed By: Mamosere On: June 06, 2012 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so sweet, i love it. This is also a great story just like the rest of your other stories. Thank you for sharing it to us. |
Reviewed By: Reader in Disguise On: September 28, 2011 18:14 EDT
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This was short and so sweet, that I actually could see the whole thing in my mind and smile! Thank you for writing and sharing! |
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2011 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such a cute read!! I love how u kept Inu in character even to the very end. It was so like him to not say the L word n I was wondering if ud slip up and just let him b the shocking lovey dover xD. Me love me some sexi Inu |
Reviewed By: sexymckittington [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2010 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see what you mean about my fic being similar to yours, this was a coincidence I asure you. My fics a bit different than yours though mostly in the aspect that it's rated x ;) still workin on the next chap of mine. I've been reading all your stories and they are all spectacular! You are by far my favourite fan fiction writer. Keep up the good work! P.s I only gave you a 9/10 on overall writing cause it's rated t.
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL great story love it...THANKS
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet. I really enjoyed this one. Excellent job on conveying Inuyasha's thoughts as he read the diary. Great work.
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Reviewed By: Lovies On: December 27, 2007 03:47 EST
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Kawii!!! Wow! This is sooo great! Right down to keeping them in character! Love it!!!! The end sorta sounded like poke'mon when he said, "I choose you Kagome". Get it? (*insert name here* I choose you!) It just popped up in my head as I read that part.
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 20:28 EDT
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*tears in eyes* Good job. Excuse me while I go cry for a bit.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
idk that inuyasha could read!? ha! gr8 story! luv it! ^^
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Reviewed By: animecraze [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 14:54 EDT
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that was soo cute...i couldnt help but go AWWWWWWWW!!!!..at the end...great writing!
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Title: Kawaii Oneesan
Reviewed By: inurules [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was too sweet for words. Also I like how your fic goes along with the series. Their not OOC either. Awesome work!!!
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Reviewed By: Gaskin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 16:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great one-shot. I can't wait for more of your work in the future!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 16:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 19:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, I'm surprised you don't have more reviews. You deserve them. You write romance even better than you write porn! I thought Kagome's diary was written completely in-character, and I loved IY's response. Very sweet. I think this one goes into my bookmark list of favorites!
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