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| "Apocalyptic" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | Reviewed By: Guilly-GuiledDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 14:46 CDT
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This is awesome!! I think it's better than the first!! Graye as a gundam is funny! Poor girl... and GunEagle is just messed up in the head.. xD I love how you mix in humor and action. YAY! More Gundam fans!? I was enjoying it in the last one with all those fangirls.. (well, I am a fangirl too, just not nearly as rabid as some) Write more more!! 8D
| Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE. BEST. FIC. ON. MEDIAMINER. Not kidding. Holy crap, this was WICKED good SBA!! I love it so much! And not because I'm in it. XP The ending was well planned out, and the lyrics were good! I could almost hear it play in my mind! And cool party. :D Well, this was a lot of fun to read SBA!! Wicked awesome fanfic on your hands! You should be proud of it!
| Reviewed By: Talec [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 01:35 CDT
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It's an /uber/party! \o/ I like that song... it sounds U2-esque. *and DIES at the performance's end* XDDD yay Zoooooooids ...and yay end-for-now! That was awesome! (Especially Cyrus pwning Slayer Edge.. muahaha. >.>) I can't wait for the next part~!
| Reviewed By: Talec [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 23:02 CDT
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"It's like a bad fanfiction that came to life." heeheehee. I don't know, I think it's a pretty GOOD fanfic. ;3 Crazy awesome, in fact!! Don't worry about the combat, it was awesome! =D
| Reviewed By: Guilly-GuiledDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 21:59 CDT
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YAY!! I love this story!! You're really good! I can't wait to see more!! 8D I need to watch you... Keep it up! I can't wait to see what happens!!! All the guess writers and fans are making me excited!!!
| Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drops to the floor in complete shock* OH. MY. SBA...This fic ROCKS. And I mean, ROCKS! This battle scene was AWESOME!! Everyone fighting together, the Gundamaniacs oulling off there moves (Melady101 cracked me up, and our team off was dead awesome), the Gundam Force counting how many Zakos they defeat (Makes me think 'Lord of the Rings' XP), and they final showdown with Graye and Nightengale was so detailed and so brilliant!! I can't believe this is almost over! ;_; What? A sequal?!! O_O *goes spastic and hugs Bakunetsumaru* Do you hear that?! There's going to be a sequal!! *realizes he's about to die from lack of oxygen and releases grip on him* Sorry Bakunetsumaru. ^^; Anyways, this is probably THE best fic I've ever read. I had so much fun reading this, and the suspense and details made me feel like I was actually there! I can't wait to read the next chapter, even if it's aftermath. No doubt that there's going to be a tearful goodbye, no? XDDD Again, this was truly a masterpiece. If Bandai were to make an SD Gundam Force movie, I think it should be based off of this. ;) Oh, and thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much for letting me be in it. You ARE the best. :D *big bear hug*
| Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 18:25 CDT
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Dang that was fast. But I beg of you keep going! You're almost there.
| Reviewed By: Talec [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 13:15 CDT
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Objectively, 'tis still good stuff! I really like your miniscene.. and everything just feels so IC. ^^ Subjectively, squee! Cameo! 8D I /would/ totally be working on the transporter. >D Also, TDAT is an appropriate movie to be watching, in this circumstance. X) Also, *dies at Melady's miniscene* XDDD
| Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang, SBA, you're really reving! Of course, you did say it was for school. STILL, this ROCKED. I think you got everyone right. You got me right, that's for sure! XDDDD Curse the bloody DVD player!! Heh, yup, I end up fixing it in the end. And, surprisingly, that's how I would want to die too. O_o You're GOOD!! I love the comment on how I would be respected in Ark. XD I love the bonding moments between Bakunetsumaru and I in this. I go "SQUEEE!!" each time I read them. Man, this upcoming battle is making me shake with anticipation! I'm so excited to read it! Of course, take your time; I know you want it to come out good. ;) Again, wonderful chapter. And thanks for letting me and my plane be in your fic. *BIG hug*
| Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AYIIIIIIIEEEEEEE!!! *spazzes* This was so GREAT!! Having the SDGManiacs defend the delegates at the Washington Conference was awesome! And way to go Shute for convincing them to fight together against the Dark Axis (Love how Graye commented it took only ten seconds/minutes for him to do that). And yayness for Bakunetsumaru and I bonding! *BIG grin* I wonder who won the spar? XP Awesome attacks you came up with when you and Melady101 were sparring. And it's so true; I usually have to help my friends get back on their feet. You really know how to get personalities down! As for Graye having all that Reiki...Yup, I sense a big battle coming. *grins again* Time for the Gundam Force, Graye, and the SDGManiacs to engage in battle! Whooo! XP Can't wait for more, as always!
| Reviewed By: Talec [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 21:43 CDT
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Woo, Reiki! I smell a Matrix-esque scheme from the Axis~ hee. :D Great chapter~ I especially like the peace conference scene! Go Shute!
| Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is completely speechless* Bakunetsumaru: *pokes me* You ok? Me: *explodes* I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!! Holy frkiin mother of frkiin crap! I'm SO sorry for not reading this sooner (*growls at school menacingly*)! But ohmigosh, this was so darn awesome! Best chapter yet (I'll probably be saying this about every chapter, considering it's getting better and better. XD)! I LOVED the aerial combat scene! SUFFER AT THE PRESENCE OF MY SX RAGE YOU SCUUUUUUUUMS!! *laughs* Bakunetsumaru: ...We're losing her... Me: Oh, shut up you. T_T' Anyways, the chapter was so good! Poor Vegas had to suffer, huh? I haven't been in that city for years... Anyways, back on topic. You still really got everyone's personalities down, especially mine (Take the part where I was watching TDAT on my monitor for instance. XD). And I blew Slayer Edge up with a grenade!! XDDDDD Yes, everything was dead awesome. Can I make a request? Can Bakunetsumaru and I become buddies? Oooo! Maybe he could ride in the passenger seat of the SX RAGE. The SX RAGE has two seats, one for the pilot (of course) and one for a passenger, which I usually leave a bunch of junk on (DVDs, CDs, drawings...). He'd probably be the first, besides my fancharacter Kyran anyways. XD Of course, you don't have to if it gets in the way of the storyline. ^^; I just would like to ask though, if you could make notes in your author's notes that the SX RAGE is copyright to me? I'd hate it if another writer or artists decided to take the plane as their own (Pretty unlikely, since most of the people reading this are friends who I know wouldn't do such a thing, but there could be some other people who might think of it and I've seen it happen...). So, could you do that, just for the sake of it? Please continue! My lassagna is going to burst if you don't update sooooooooooon!! *laughs* I kid. Take your time SBA, good old buddy and bunkmate. *hugs* ^^
| Reviewed By: Talec [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 01:13 CST
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Haa, this is an awesome read. :D | Your notes about interdimensional relations and continuum-keeping in Chapter 3 is rather similar to some I'd come up with.. interesting. | Does the SDGManiacs forum exist in this universe? :P | ...but hey, if the oldest you know of is 23 six years from now.. I should be the oldest. (26.. aiie.) Maybe I've been voided. --I'm sorry, I just couldn't resist saying. :D
| Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 18:26 CST
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Awesome!
| Reviewed By: curly211 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 17:34 CST
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Finally the thing is letting me review this story! I've been trying to forever since this story is just awesome. It's really well written and the whole idea is just so freakin' awesome! Oh, and I know it's really late but welcome! ^^
| Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dies a million times* HOKY FRIKKIN- This was the bessest chapter so far!! *squeals* Having a battle scene in New York was PERFECT!! I could picture a desolated city in my mind and the entire battle! And as for the fangirls... *makes a big wh00sh sound* It was so awesome! Pure genious for them to hold secret meetings about the fandom! Everyone was awesome! You kept me so much in character, it was unbelievable. Yup, I love to kid, but I'm serious when I have to be. And I love it when I was squealing over Grappler. :D And you mentioned my plane! The SX RAGE!! O..O I can't believe I'll be flying my plane! *squeals some more* I lurve my firey four-winged plane! ^..^ Poor trio with the shock collars... ;_; How DARE SLAYER EDGE HURT MY GWAPPLY!! >< Errr, not MY Grapply... Ummm... *blushes* Sudden outburst there. *sweat drops* I need to calm down now. Heh. Again, WONDERFUL, wonderful chapter! I'm bouncing up and down because I'm so excited! *looks at limit of words for review* Umm... How about I praise you some more over at the world board? *sweat drops* I can't wait for more SBA!! It's a pleasure to be serving with you in the air force! *salutes*
| Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you're pretty good with writing about corruption and ruin. O..O Very nice chapter, as we now see everything beggining to unfold. Looks like the Dark Axis is going to have some trouble on their hands. *smirks* Poor Grappler. XP Heh, who DOES Graye like? XD *gets smacked with a fish* Please update soon! BTW, did you join Deviantart recently? I saw someone that went by 'SilverBellsAbove' and I couldn't help but wonder if it was you? If it is, theen you know who reviewed your homepage then. ;p
| Title: 4 big thumbs up!!*thats including my big toes*
Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 18:30 CST
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wow!!..awesome..u rock..and welcome too..we need more sd gudnam fans..yay!..keep it up...more more..must do more!!!
| Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy frikkin... That was... AWESOME! Excellent, excellent piece of fanfiction here. The characters were really well kept in character and Graye seems like the type you want to hang out with. And Grappler Gouf appeared! :D *is a MAJOR fangirl of him* Although, Baku seems a bit out of character, but I won't go too deep into that, considering you critisized yourself on that. As far as Graye being a Mary-Sue, the people who told you don't know the meaning of the term. Although, you might want to keep her 'inexperienced' as you said. Sorry I didn't review sooner. Mediaminer wouldn't let me review, even though I was logged in. I look forward to future chapters. Oh, and welcome to Mediaminer. It's a pleasure to have more SD Gundam fans. If you like action fics, I have one that fills the need. :p Again, wonderful fic! You have me on the edge of my seat, starving for more!
| Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 19:46 CST
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Not a bad atart at all. Please continue.
| Title: hello!
Reviewed By: arisasora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Finally a fiction that takes place in our world...sort of. But not in a random way. keep up the good work! And if you need some humorous fiction to read please read mine!
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