| "Hanyou on a Hot Plate: Guess Who's Coming To Dinner" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. it was so sweet how they were,like, constantly expressing their love to each other, that was my favorite part. the sacred egg from the previous fanfic was hilarious! it was like "incoming glowing pink egg!"lol (well i imagined it pink) i hope, no, more than hope that you write a 4th one, this stuff is pure gold
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Somehow I missed your last update. So Im glad I went looking for it.Think theres something wrong with MM. Anyways, Love the update. LMAO, you did get alot of that very correct. About the labor I mean. Heh, try having one without the aid of an epidural and see how that feels. Makes my back hurt just thinking about it. Oh yea, Im that old,lol. Dunno about the OOC for Kagome tho, lol, I mean how IC can you make her when shes in labor? Im surprised you didnt have her throw alot more *InuYasha type* words back at him,lol. But then again, the pup's not here yet.
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Reviewed By: Angel~of~Hope On: January 12, 2006 05:42 CST
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man that was good i like the way you made Kagome out it was sort of funny well please update soon
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Title: Quite nice
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have kept them all in character, save Sesshomaru but then he has tone down a bit and is understandable. THe part about Inuyasha saying it was the first time he saw him was great, and Kagomes ranting too.
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 21:47 CST
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R.O.T.F.L.M.A.O. TOO DAMN FUNNY. IT JUST FIGURED HE'D BE TYPICAL AND FORGET KAGOME. LOVE IT
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me a bit to get through the first couple lines, cause I couldnt stop laughing, dammit! Now my son really does think Im a loon cause he was sitting here watching me,LMAO. I think hes more intrigued than anything. He did read your last one, and loved it as well. I was wondering when you were going to update, and am so glad you were able to so soon.
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Title: Hillarious
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 12:17 CST
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Yo updated, great! I am still lol, the ending was great. I can actually imagine him actualy arriving at the hospital without her.
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Title: Stil laughing
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your stories are very funny, the whole atmosphere you built was great I particulary loved when the friend is warning her not to use anything that might be turn into a weapon on the table and the fact that they have kept their personalities mostly intact. Keep updating
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Reviewed By: Angel~of~Dreams On: January 02, 2006 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh that was soo good please please update really soon
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle and jackie On: January 01, 2006 18:14 CST
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SPEEDY:this is some good stuff right here JACKIE:yessirebob!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am almost in tears here reading these 3 stories. Oh my goodness they are so funny...can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you continue this series...it's great.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! I like this...ALOT!! I liked the other one as well. I was wondering how it would work with you making InuYasha human, but it seems to be coming along great. LMAO with the egg-fest,and now this. And am always happy to see when you're able to update. Keep it up, this is good.
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: December 21, 2005 19:10 CST
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damnit why wont people review ypu? youre awesome.
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: December 10, 2005 13:26 CST
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he he. this is good stuff. i found my new happy drug!update soon!purple to the second power!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel~of~Dreams On: December 09, 2005 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great chapter i can't wait for the next one
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