| "The Sous-Chef" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: GaleStorm On: December 10, 2005 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really love the way you write and absolutely cant get enough Shu/Yoji.I used to like Aya/yoji but everyone seems to turn him into such a PMSing girl these dats thast I'vr gone off Aya .I cant tell what your take on him is yet,but it seems not too extreme,But PLEASE dont make them a 3some .I dont mind them but only if its the only way to get S+Y togetherand as they're already together.....still its your fic and if thats what you have planned than ai'm hopeful that you can pull it off in a way that keep me interested(for my sake ,not yours.Ilike your writing style)
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Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 08:52 CST
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I must say that I adored this chapter. It was frightfully well-wrought, and just screwed up enough to really satiate my desire to see the Weiss and Schwarz boys reasonably off balance considering what must be the incredibly turbulent state of their minds and lives. One of my biggest pet peeves when reading in the Weiss fandom is reading about the characters having lovely, happy, well-adjusted sex lives, especially when they've had to do nothing to earn them. There's really no easy way to get around the fact that these are all very young, very hurt asssassins, with complicated pasts and even more complicated presents. So seeing someone embrace those complications and write such beautifully convoluted interludes between characters is such a treat. I really love how you've taken into account Aya-Chan and Asuka and what being a killer has done to these boys, and how that's seeped into their psyches, and of necessity, into their sex lives as well. I'm really quite in awe, and I can't wait to see how things continue. Lovely, lovely work.
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Reviewed By: eva84 On: December 08, 2005 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still loving this a lot. Schuldig's clumsy attempts at seduction were adorable. I also like that you didn't use the "instant" falling in love plot device.
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Reviewed By: Darkanger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so wonderful. Your writing has such a great texture. The pace is right, the characters are solid, the story is creative and the jump back and forth through time is cohesive and not in the least disorienting as it can be with some writers. I can't wait to see what you have coming next.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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you just blow me away, lady. Wow. Keep it up! Beautiful job with the flashbacks and memories. Absolutely wonderful, in one up/down, sexy and sad and beautiful chapter we're all caught up and ready for wherever your twisty mind is headed! (as ready as we can be, anyway...)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 20:21 CST
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Wow! Just . . . wow.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: December 04, 2005 16:35 CST
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poor schu feeling jealous and probaby insecure that yohji will leave him for ran and poor ran getting abandond by aya without a goodbye... hmmm i wonder what a blue schu would look like.... *drool*
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 13:39 CST
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It's a little sad, but extremely well written. I like your style a lot and feel like it allows me close to the characters. I'm very much looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 23:41 CST
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Honestly, dear, I don't see how you could doubt your work. I can almost taste the wine and REAL chocolate.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I can't believe you doubted this. I'm still reading, and you know I don't like Aya or Yohji with anyone but Aya or Yohji! That should tell you how truly awesome you are. *performs patented kamehameha b*tch-slap on Aya-chan*
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 23:06 CST
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sooo i'm still gunning for my ax Y x S fic :) but lovely read
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Reviewed By: eva84 On: December 03, 2005 09:17 CST
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What a wonderful and promising start! You showed lots of origiality here, while still keeping the essencess of the characters in-tact. One other thing I loved about this was how very possible and believable all of the events and characters lives seemed. I hope very much you continue this!
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Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 00:05 CST
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My goodness, that was lovely. I'm thoroughly impressed by your absolutely brilliant sense of setting; something sadly lacking in a good portion of the fanfiction I come across. Beautiful descriptions, excellent characterization, and an entirely enjoyable read. I certainly can't wait to see how this continues. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: mm-c On: December 02, 2005 20:20 CST
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so you know this is fab right?? and after re-reading all i can say is i still want to smack aya-chan...please may i?? *fretting over retardedness of girl*
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Title: I'll say it again
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know how I feel about this, but I'll say it again. You write beautifully, and this seems the beginning of an awesome story. I'm so glad you're sharing it!
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