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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 16:07 CST
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Excellent! This is one of the most original stories I have read in a long time. Well thought out with only minor spelling errors. Great story line I like the pairing. The character building has been great and I look forward to what more you have in store for everyone. Great job! Keep up the writing and don't let anyone discourage you.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(nsi) On: January 06, 2006 13:07 CST
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I love this story..i think its the most descriptive one i have ever read on this site! wow, i mean i can picture everything exactly as it is happening like im really there...half the time when im reading these stories i have to make up some of the parts and settings myself for the lack of information...but not yours!!! Im just curious so its not necesary for an answer but...how do you know so much about the military? are you in it?? Its just that Ive kind of been thinking about joining and getting back into karate and self-defence now that I have more time...if you are in the military or someone close...no offense... i was just wondering if you liked it and if you might even suggest it. Also, your story is VERY original...if it isnt its the first ive read with this plot and I doubt any of them could even compare so please keep writing!! By the way... Im all cooped up in my house right now...so I absolutely LOVE the fact that you have been updating soo much!! Thankyou!!! and once again...Please keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in (Ever) On: January 05, 2006 22:29 CST
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mm, what very pleasant surprise! As well as a tastey treat, haha. Well played, Sesshoumaru, well played. Once again, your words leave me amazed with their ability to move and capture the moments like movies in our minds. Your story has easily moved into the top tiers as far as favorite stories goes. Once again, amazing chapter! Hasta Luego.
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: January 05, 2006 09:56 CST
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Pretty sure even I've fallen in love with Sesshoumaru and now want to marry him, hahaha. Great chapter! Your amazing way with words really gave great insight into the mind that is Sesshoumaru. I cannot wait for more and am very curious about the North Pole, haha. Take care!
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Reviewed By: jc On: January 05, 2006 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with grapejellybean in that I was pleasantly surprised with the plot and the creativity that had been put into it. I has a great potential to go far. I also was wondering whether you had meant to write "Hogo" as Hogo or did you mean "Hojo"? That's the only possible error I could find :) I hope you continue to update for us readers would need a bit of something new and creative to read while still appreciating Inuyasha(c). No doubt this will make its way towards the more popular fictions soon enough :D
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Reviewed By: grapejellybean [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 19:36 CST
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Wow! All I really can say is wow. Well, maybe I can say more. Thats was beautiful. I have enjoyed your story very much. It is well written and has depth. Keep up the hard work and can't wait for you to update!
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Title: O____O
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: January 04, 2006 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Oh my god, this is such a GREAT fic. I'm surprised it doesn't have way more reviews. Anyways, this story is really original. I like your style of wording. The story keeps me interested throughout the entire thing. Please continue to update this fic; I'll be waiting eagerly for the next update, as I'm sure many more are :]
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: January 04, 2006 10:45 CST
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Definitely more than liked the chapter, haha, more like loved it. You write everything with such an interesting edge and such intelligence behind the words! I love all of the connections and all of the twists and turns that keep us guessing. Great work! I look forward to reading more!! Thanks for creating such a great story to read!
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Reviewed By: bk On: January 04, 2006 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know I really like this story. Keep up the good work I will be watching for updates. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: January 03, 2006 08:41 CST
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ou! What a place to leave us haning. hmm, I have to wonder what is going on. Perhaps its a secret boyfriend of Sango's? Hmm.. well maybe not, I feel like she would have said something had that been the case. Look how easily Kagome and Sesshoumaru fell into the roles of being old lovers, hehe. Can't wait to read more. Excellent chapters!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 01:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, just wanted to leave a quick note and say that I really enjoy your story. Your writing proves that you have earned each and every one of those 10's in the above ratings. I was sad once I ran out of chapters to read, and I eagerly awaiting more! Thanks for the great story, keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: angelickagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! it's my new favorite :D can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, U DID A GREAT JOB ON IT!!!
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Title: R u a real writer? Hijacked Honeymoon
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
R u a real writer? U r real good whatever u r. Please update and I hope you don't ALWAYS have alot of work! ^^
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 17, 2005 14:52 CST
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I like this story. But, I think chapter 6 belongs to a different story.
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