| "Hijacked Honeymoon" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: everfadingsmile On: February 12, 2006 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was an awsome story, one of the best i have ever read! i hope to read more of your stuff soon *efs*
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Reviewed By: xKillingPerfection On: February 11, 2006 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMG. I love your story. I an't believe it's over. o_o wah. I shall miss it sooo much. T_T Sorry I haven't reviewed before :\ I thought I had at least once, but I checked it over and turns out I havent. -_- It's kinda confusing with all of the fnafictions I read. XD Well, just to tell you, I loved your story, you are a fantastic writer! If you're looking for a beta for another story, contact me at xKillingPerfection@gmail.com!
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: February 11, 2006 07:47 CST
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Absolutely loved it!! What a great climatic ending! Thanks for writing this amazing story. Will there be more to come in the form of a second story? hehe. Perfect 10's all around!
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Reviewed By: Sessyluvr On: February 02, 2006 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an exciting story, you have to update it
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: January 31, 2006 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please update as soon as you can. That was a horrible place to quit. I need to know if Sesshoumaru gets Kagome back soon.
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Reviewed By: angelickagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 18:36 CST
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lol wrong fic, my stupid compy, neways i love this story, keep it up
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Reviewed By: angelickagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 18:34 CST
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i'm glad there's gunna be a inu/kag lemon, Sango should have a girl, poor Miroku ;P poor inu, hope he doesn't have to date a guy
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: January 28, 2006 08:28 CST
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amazing! If I had to write a one word review that might be the word I would use.. But luckily, this is not a one word review and mm.org tells me that I can use 4000 characters! haha. Wow--I loved the detail of in this chapter--everything just drew me in and I read so fast and you know how when you get so entrenched into someting, like when reading or painting, that the rest of the world fades away and you really have no essence of time? Yea, that happened too, haha. Well, I best be off-- Loved the chapter!!!! Please update as soon as possible as I will be hanging off the last words of this chapter until the next one comes out, te he he. Hasta Luego!
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Reviewed By: Aitu---rarely signed in On: January 25, 2006 10:42 CST
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aaaahhhhh! Evil cliff hanger!!! "and then the lights went out." what is that?!?! hahaha. Need more. Love the story (still and maybe even more now). Excellent writing! Cannot wait for more!! hehe. Take care and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: TLPeach On: January 20, 2006 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cruel...very very cruel...*sniffle*
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: January 13, 2006 22:43 CST
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Very excellent chapter, my friend. I am still in love with the amazing detail with which you write your chapters--All of the itsy bitsy details which make up Sesshoumaru and his job never cease to amaze me. Grrr Kagome! Just be happy with the boy!! hahaha. Go to the Bahamas--- ou, I know the perfect secluded spot... Its a sleepy little town named Xcalak in Mexico, about 8 miles from Belieze. With so much jungle and inhabited land, its easy to get lost down there, te he. Well, once again, amazing work, perfect 10's all around. I am dying to read more. Thanks and take care! Ciao bella
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: January 10, 2006 19:58 CST
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ouuu! Damn, I am going to have to agree with Kagome in that the Shey Group moves very fast. I adored everything about the newest chapter--Very exciting and full of twists and turns! I can't wait to see what will happen next! You do fabulous work. Ciao bella.
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 15:51 CST
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this story is awesome! there wasn't a time when i got bored, and your story is very well structured. also you seem to be well informed and this adds to the suspense! great story!
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 16:07 CST
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Excellent! This is one of the most original stories I have read in a long time. Well thought out with only minor spelling errors. Great story line I like the pairing. The character building has been great and I look forward to what more you have in store for everyone. Great job! Keep up the writing and don't let anyone discourage you.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(nsi) On: January 06, 2006 13:07 CST
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I love this story..i think its the most descriptive one i have ever read on this site! wow, i mean i can picture everything exactly as it is happening like im really there...half the time when im reading these stories i have to make up some of the parts and settings myself for the lack of information...but not yours!!! Im just curious so its not necesary for an answer but...how do you know so much about the military? are you in it?? Its just that Ive kind of been thinking about joining and getting back into karate and self-defence now that I have more time...if you are in the military or someone close...no offense... i was just wondering if you liked it and if you might even suggest it. Also, your story is VERY original...if it isnt its the first ive read with this plot and I doubt any of them could even compare so please keep writing!! By the way... Im all cooped up in my house right now...so I absolutely LOVE the fact that you have been updating soo much!! Thankyou!!! and once again...Please keep writing!!!
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