Reviewed By:lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 23:35 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I am really enjoying your story so far. Please don't be discouraged by only getting a few reviews. I haven't had anyone read my story yet because it is original. If you ever have time, it's called The Moondiver Chronicles: Defiance. I hope you continue with this one. I really can hear the characters in my head saying the things you have them say. I think your story is very good. I can't wait to find out if Winry is pregnant or not! Don't keep me in suspense for too long. Keep up the good work. Jessica