| "Nothing Left to Lose" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are awsome... do you know why. Because u update. That makes you one of the best writers on this site. Heh...^_~
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Title: o my kami that was great
Reviewed By: kags1 On: January 13, 2006 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls continue cause i luv it so much
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Reviewed By: reddragn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 05:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful! Please continue!
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Title: nothing left to lose
Reviewed By: lashaun [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still love the story update soon ok sorry the review is so short but I have to go now.^-^
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Reviewed By: mojop [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 18:43 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Your portrayal of Kagome is so true to the real story. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: January 08, 2006 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how Rin is perfectly willing to throw any and all aspects of manners out the window for a chance to spar. We have obviously found her love in life :) I also enjoyed the quiet time by the waterfall with Kagome and Sesshoumaru. He definately needed it and Kagome would be about the only one to give it to him. Good Job
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep i acctually had ime to read and reeview at my leisure this time. Much more enjoyable than rushing. Keep upthe good work. I can't wait for the next chapter... ^_~
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Title: long time no post
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while since i read but i'm all caught up now. Yay! I don't really have much to say other than great job. You don't need any advise because you are doing great on your own and i won't request something because if your anything like me you wouldn't listen any who... lol. Keep up the good work...^_~
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 23:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Merkamou is fun, if a little devious and I knew Kagome would fall for Sesshomaru! She has that kind of heart. If you are still looking for a beta, I'd be happy to do it, but be forewarned (and this is from experience), beta readers slow down your posting, though I would try to get it read and commented as quickly as possible. I'm not a grammer queen or anything, but a second pair of eyeballs always helps. You might check out my stuff first, to make sure that you'd want me to do it. Anyway, if you're interested, email me! -Rhiannon
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: January 02, 2006 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Classic line: `It's kind of embarrassing when one of my guards runs away from a little girl.' -- I thought it was cute . -- Though from the rest of the description it sounds like Rin is really dedicated. That is good and something I could stand to adopt. In many ways Merkamou sounds like a big kid at heart. I like how enjoys sparing with Rin and is willing to teach her various tricks. I also like how he has a very serious streak to his character where he was willing to sacrifice himself for the sake of his lands. Matches very will with the passion for his lands of last chapter. I also enjoyed Sesshoumaru using him to "relieve some stress" About time he wiped the floor with someone disparaging his mate. I'm glad that Merkamou finally approved of Kagome. The sake scene at the end was amusing as well.--- Again another good read.
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: January 02, 2006 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah yes I needed a good laugh. Thank you very much for that. I like the list of what we aren't going to do in the beginning. I also liked how Rin challenged Merkamou. Very amusing. I think my favorite part was the following. "Sesshomaru-sama, it is a wonder you get any peace in this house." "Hai." Sesshomaru looked decidedly bored. `You have no idea.' Also amusing was the "exit" from the dining hall. At least they tried. I like the new name for Sesshoumaru "Jo-Chan" Oopse! All in all very enjoyable. I needed that
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: January 02, 2006 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah yes I needed a good laugh. Thank you very much for that. I like the list of what we aren't going to do in the beginning. I also liked how Rin challenged Merkamou. Very amusing. I think my favorite part was the following. "Sesshomaru-sama, it is a wonder you get any peace in this house." "Hai." Sesshomaru looked decidedly bored. `You have no idea.' Also amusing was the "exit" from the dining hall. At least they tried. I like the new name for Sesshoumaru "Jo-Chan" Oopse! All in all very enjoyable. I needed that
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Reviewed By: Janii On: January 01, 2006 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There really needs to be more of this story soon. I love non-ditz Kagome, and I think you've got an interesting approach to their relationship and I want to see it play out (also I want to see the very public turning to ash of some disapproving flunkies. I'll get that, won't I? Please???).
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Title: Bookreader9999
Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. The chapters flow really well and the characterization is enjoyable. Can't wait for the next update!!!
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: December 30, 2005 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the Captain has discovered make her angery and you get the odd result. Good :) I too like the line where Kagome suggests that perhaps he should ask before touching. The next chapter will be interesting. I also like how after an encounter with him Kagome decides that perhaps 4 guards would be appropriate. Pitty the poor captain who had to stand there and take that. It is good that the Lord approves of Kagome and hopefully there won't be too much trouble from that part. All in all a good job. Please keep up the good work.
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