| "Blazing Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 193 ] |
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Title: Noooo!!!!
Reviewed By: CrazyLady101 On: February 14, 2006 22:29 EST
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noooooooooo.....it was getting really interesting. please udate soon. Loving the story.
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Reviewed By: sessy's girl On: February 14, 2006 21:06 EST
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you are evil! Hurry and put the next chaper up.
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: February 14, 2006 20:25 EST
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Kagome was cool until he got to the part of her and Kagura being together. He was so boeing. He talked about another woman and his pet monkey/best friend. Wow! Kagome made it pretty long in there with him. I couldn't do it. Please write a new chapter soon. I want to know what Kagome is going to say back to Inuyasha's last remark.
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Reviewed By: arenoid On: February 12, 2006 12:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fabulous but how sad i love it write more soon!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: February 07, 2006 18:38 EST
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that bastard, o well. Inu's better for her anyway. please update soon.
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 03:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic so far with a nice original plot! It's definitely fresh. I've never seen anyone make Kagura a lesbian, lol! It fits perfectly with your story though. Miroku and Sango make such a cute couple and I'm glad Kagome made it happen. ^^ Kikyou is a bitch, nuff said, lol. Now to Inu and Kags, it'll be interesting to see how you bring them together considering your plot. After all, he is Kagome's client and I'm pretty sure her bosses won't liek her getting involved personally with a client, especially not Inuyasha since he has a past with Kikyou. I also liek how you're pursuing Kagome's love life to show why she works for Blazing Hearts, even if it is kinda sad. That Kouga and Kagome past moment was definitely not what I was expecting but it was perfect nonetheless. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! As for some constructive criticism some improvements you could make to your style would be to lengthen your chapters possibly by adding more description. Bring the scenes to life by fleshing them out a bit more. Other than that I think you're doing a good job so far. Keep up the good work! ^^
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing(not signed in) On: February 06, 2006 21:53 EST
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Wow! Fantastic job! I loved it so much. I just read all of the chapters so far and I cant find anything bad about it, except that i agree with dancin4inu (the smoking part). Please update as soon as you can! I love it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Deeg On: February 06, 2006 16:14 EST
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More,more,MORE! You must write more,com'on please? That is sad,i'm getting excited though...we need more chapters. inuyashalover1221
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu On: February 06, 2006 00:02 EST
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I see that all your reviews have been positive... I wish I could add some variety to your reviews, but I must say I agree with them all. You have wonderful pacing, wonderful character development, and you leave me wanting more every time. I wish I had some constructive criticism, but I can't really think of anything negative to say (except that I don't like the fact that Inu smokes). I also love how you stay true to the characters even in an AU. Nicely done, please continue!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 21:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! you updated! Awww that's so sad that koga did that but i really enjoyed the chapter and i an so happy you finally updated! : ) Anyway .. i LOVE this story so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 21:05 EST
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That is so sad. He said he wait for her and didn't. But I don't know if you are a demon and you reach of age. What happens if you got get a mate? But Kogua mating Ayame was for the best because now she can be with her one true love Inuyasha. Please write a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 12:05 EST
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this is an awesome story. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: anime_princess On: February 05, 2006 06:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o i luv it. plz plz plz update soon!!!
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Title: Good Kami!
Reviewed By: Deeg On: January 28, 2006 18:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Kami! This storys FANTASTIC!You gotta finish,write more or somthing!But why so mean to Rin? What'ed she do to you? You better clear up the fact that Kagome is NOT a lesbian,and soon. Later
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Reviewed By: arenoid On: January 28, 2006 11:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job just please make a new one soon I like it soo much!
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