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Title: Caught
Reviewed By: Inuyashaxkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I can't wait for the next chappie! God, what is Kaggie gonna do with koga, and I really want to know what happened 7 years ago. But anyways, this was the best fic! Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 16, 2006 23:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I can not believe Hiten would do something like that. I then Kogua gets mad at him when he about to try the same thing. Hiten was hust trying to be a friend and keep Kogua away from a really bad heartache. Inuyasha can't go anywhere without getting in trouble.
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Reviewed By: Twin Star On: January 16, 2006 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
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hun, you really need to get a beta... i'm not saying that to be mean - it's just a fact. you REALLY need to work on your grammer and spelling, 'cause, with me atleast, i'm reading through your fic and FIXING your errors - which REALLY detracts from your story. You have a good start, but you need to correct your spelling and GRAMMER
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 21:23 CST
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Good cliffie okay. It makes all your readers want more. I wish i could do that. oh well the good will come to me one day.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LoL, for some reason i thought that was funny when Koga got all mad at the end. Denial much? LoL. Great update, I love Inu, and I can't wait for the next update!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: AWESOMENESS
Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 19:20 CST
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NOO THE EVIL CLIFFY STRIKES AGEN!!!!lol well the onlii thing i dont like is the fact that Koga WONT get a CLUE that Kagome doesnt like him!!lol well InuYasha is PERFECT for Kagome well please update ASAP!!BTW all the pairings are AWESOMLEY GREAT!!!
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 19:15 CST
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ah man you blow, i was starting to get into the story. answer me one thing, does kikyo die? please tell me she dies lol.
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Title: AHHH!
Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 17:08 CST
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That was so good and what a cliff hanger!
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Title: Caught
Reviewed By: VickyEvilEvily On: January 15, 2006 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this was the best story yet! I totally loved it, but I really want Kagome and Inuyasha to meet soon cause that where the fun begins, right? Anyways, please update soon, I dieing to read what happens next, and I really want to know what happened to Kagome 7 years ago. Anyways, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 10, 2006 23:47 CST
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Do It Right that does sound like a strip club. This contest is going to be funny. If Miroku sees Sango he going to think she is the best. aND WHEN iNUYASHA sees Kagome he won't want anybody else looking at her.
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Title: Caught
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: naomi-nicole On: January 03, 2006 21:58 CST
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Wow this story is soooo awsome and i want to read the next chapter now! PLEASE!! I can't wait to see Inuyasha and Kagome together and the other pairs as well. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 04:48 CST
Comment/Review:
This seems like a cool story so far. I can't wait till Kag and Inu meet... -TrinityK
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: Icy Egyptian On: December 31, 2005 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really great so far!!! The only thing is woman is spelled like that. The way you use it is plural. I know you probably want to throw a really pointy object at me for writing that...but I love your story sooooooooo much!!!
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: WhiteDragonsAmethyst [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
three words: next chapter...NOW!!!
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