| "Mission: Freak Out Kakashi" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2010 04:46 CST
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I see the last update was in 2006 i really hope you haven't lost this story and will update I'm truly liking it
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Caelta On: July 02, 2007 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and it has a great plot and originality, but you haven't written in FOREVER!!! I started reading this and finished about a few months ago, and i put the website on my favorites hoping you'd come back and write more. So much for that...I finished my own little fanfic now. Its ovr 200 pgs. But I didn't post it...
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Title: y stop?
Reviewed By: hey there On: June 12, 2007 03:24 CDT
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i know its been months since you last wrote the story but why stop? i really enjoy and keep coming bak here hoping you wrote more but you havent. i hope u do come bak and finish because i am acheing to see the results and wat is to happen!!!
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Reviewed By: cheza_666 On: June 03, 2007 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVES!! update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: Creao On: April 26, 2007 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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ohhh continue it, please, please I want to more fanfic ^^ Or give me to email; marialuisafils@hotmail.com Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Su On: March 11, 2007 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I soo love it, its really grate. I would like if you updated soon, cuz i want to know whats going to hapen!! I'm relly happy for reading this!! plz update asap!!! Hugs ~Su - the Pnk Bunny (CosenAngel at Fanfiction.net)
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Reviewed By: copycat_capycot On: February 19, 2007 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you nine because you fail to update. It would have been a ten if you weren't slacking off.
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Title: I hate you
Reviewed By: copycat_capycot On: February 14, 2007 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story's good, but I hate you. Know why? Because you fail to update. So I hate you.
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Reviewed By: IceCream On: February 04, 2007 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey KIKItsune, she can write what she wants, it is HER storyline not yours. I like the story it is very up beat to me. Keep with the updates! I wanna see how this story turns out to be like. PS: I love you!
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Title: Exquisite
Reviewed By: KIKItsune On: December 15, 2006 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do not rate 10 for a range of reasons. First there is nothing perfect. Second even readers have flaws. The evolution and pace was good, although too fast in some parts and too slow in others. In general I look forward to see the continuation. I will point some parts that seemed a bit odd. 1) Naruto character: most than Sasuke, Naruto should be jealous. But as it is an story after some years (not children anymore), although he continue to pose like tokusatsu-heroes, Naruto grew up to a stature that can bring Tsunade to heal Sasuke, bearing the ache of seeing Sakura hugging his rival. 2) Kakashi: too fast at first (to almost ask Sakura to date), and too slow to catch now. If I read well Kakashi´s past, he was almost a Sasuke when he was young (that´s ironic). The mask, the Itcha Itcha Paradise are there not only to repel women because he´s afraid of killing loved ones (if so, it would not work with male friends), but I guess he was chased - like Sasuke is - by girls. Even now, when he puts off his mask - women got "hearts eyes" (in the anime, I mean. Real life does not count). Hell, even the MALE owner of soba-shop got a bit carried off by "beautifulness" of Kakashi! The mask serves him well to block the horde of fans inside the story. (episode 101) 3) Sasuke: here I guess you should work a bit slowly. From realizing Sakura´s heart is not in mission - more than usual - to realizing his own jealously, I would bet it was a bit quick step.
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Reviewed By: Suzzii On: December 10, 2006 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mez loving this^^ plz update... I wanna know how it's gonna end!! they are sooo cute together^^ an its funny that sasuke is jelous(cant spell) I relly love this and need to know how it ends!! (L) *happy happy* see ya!!
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Reviewed By: gaara_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii! Kawaii!
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Title: I love this story plz continue
Reviewed By: Inch Girl On: November 07, 2006 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your style of writing draws me in and I always want to read more Damn school bell always goes off when I get to a tense or funny moment. Plz continue your work I think I'm addicted to it
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: raven angel of death On: October 11, 2006 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool i think you shold make a tv side show with this
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Title: from: kakasaku4ever
Reviewed By: sasusaku4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just fineshed this all for the first time. You should end it with kakashi pooring out all the emotions for sakura hes kept in the whole time or something like that. I don't know...i'm a seirous kakasaku freak if you haven't noticed.Whatever you do with it considering it so far it'll be amazing. But it's your story so do what ever you wan't to with it.
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