| "Learning to Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Title: Thank you for the update!
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 17:59 EDT
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I've been following your stories for quite sometime and I like your writing style alot! I haven't reviewed before, I don't think, but I want to now. I know that everyone is entitled to their own opinions, but when I read inuAngelInuDevil's review I just blew up! With reviewers like that who needs enemies right? That asshat can just kiss my ass (both cheeks)! We all know that when a person writes fanfiction that it is only a hobbie for them. With your writing style you show us your passion and I thank you for your time. Take care of you. Christal
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Title: THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As my title says....THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU (is that all of them?)!!! Thanks for updating!!! The baby is SO adorable!!!! I am a little dissapointed that its the end though in the next chapter.:(( This story is So good....but I guess everything has to end...unfortunately. Well great great great!!! job and I can't wait for the next!!!!!!! Well I will for the next few weeks but when I can't stand it anymore I will let you know! lol. Great job and...and.. I loved the chapter!! :D
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Reviewed By: InuLover666 On: May 17, 2006 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Your story its VERY INTERESTING!! But... Your story needs some work with the spelling and I feel like you need alittle more detail. Things happen in your story to fast for comfort. You should add more detail to it so it makes it alittle more interesting. But overall you did a nice job.
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Reviewed By: cougiecat12 On: May 16, 2006 06:00 EDT
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Your writing style and immagry is excellent. And your characters are well done. But... (here it comes) that's the problem. Your immagry was too well done, I felt too much empathy for Kagome in the beginning so that when she finally did get with Inu it felt really wrong and disgusting. I'm not saying it can't be done, it's just that I never really felt like he paid for what he did emotionally. It felt like 2 weeks confinement= everything is ok. Kagome forgave and began to trust him way to easily. In case it was just chance in replicating this mental illness, Stokholm Syndrom is a form of brainwashing in which a captive falls in love with her captor. Phrases like: 'It's my fault I was beaten.' and 'Oh no. He wouldn't make me eat dog food... at least not all the time. Only when I did something wrong. He's very nice to me- Really!'Wilkipedia:The Stockholm syndrome is a psychological response sometimes seen in a hostage, in which the hostage exhibits seeming loyalty to the hostage-taker, in spite of the danger (or at least risk) the hostage has been put in. Stockholm syndrome is also sometimes discussed in reference to other situations with similar tensions, such as battered woman syndrome, child abuse cases, and bride kidnapping. I would have been able to enjoy this very well written piece more if there had been more development emotionally and less raunchy sex (the scenes were well done just poorly timed). Maybe 2-3 full chapters dedicated solely to Kagome's emotional repair. I liked the scene where Inu was showing his guild BEFORE Sango came, I think more of that might make hiim a slightly more sympathetic character.
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat12 On: May 16, 2006 02:23 EDT
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Wow Kagome is really messed up. It's kinda scary. You write Stockholm Syndrome really well. I'm just shocked that his family is still trying to get them together. Don't they realize that he's diven her insane!?! She really needs some serious help.
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Reviewed By: kawaii bell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 09:21 EDT
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aww that was so cute i do hope that you wont forget to update. and i just loved this chapter it was so kawaii!
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Reviewed By: chessycat On: May 15, 2006 04:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is absoloutly (sp?) amazing i can tell that your really dedicated to your writting and thats something I really respect you take your time to make sure the work you put out is excellent. im so glad i found this story, when i first started reading it i had to try really hard not to cry. but i guess thats what makes a story good ok im going to stop rambling so please keep writting! and please get the next chapter out asap. (or take your time whatever) love !chessycat!
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: May 14, 2006 23:15 EDT
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It's nice that Kagome and Inuyasha are happy now,but he's never really apologized for what he's done to her, ans what about his supposed pack. And whatver happened to Ayame? So none of his friends were against him and Kagome or what? You are kind of leaving that unresoved, unless it will be explained in the epilogue.
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Title: yes!!
Reviewed By: me On: May 14, 2006 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZUKOI!! u updated! i still love this story, and i hope the epilogue will be good, like; 'adorable'!! love it: inu_inu_luvluv
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: May 14, 2006 14:50 EDT
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sorry about that, i had a little to much sugar when i last reviewed. this chap was really sweet. great job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inuAngelInuDevil On: May 12, 2006 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you give it up didn't you thats why you stopped updating new chapters cus you can't do this can you i know alot of people that quit and you are one of them. you have had fans and you let them down.
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Title: :D ^_^
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I love this story!! When I had first started reading it, the first chapter, I was really ifish but I am REALLY glad I continued it because this story is awesome!!! The characters, although in a different time, are very accurate and I think amazing!!! I read your last author's note and I am really upset that you said you weren't going to continue it!! It is so awesome and you are an awesome author!!!!! I really hope you at least add one more chapter as the epilouge or something just so you wont leave me hanging on a new moon!!!!! Sorry....Alright well I really hope you do and I....am out of words. lol. ^_^ OH and by the way, you ARE NOT off your rocker!!
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Title: Such a Delightful Contradiction...
Reviewed By: Reih On: April 22, 2006 13:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, I love this story. I like how you did something unique and made InuYasha both an antagonist and protagonist. Most people write fanfictions with InuYasha being kind and caring and open, without explaining why or how he came to be that way. I also like how Kagome is a stronger character in this story, but also weak. Your story is full of contradictions, but they are welcome ones that are well written and well explained. In short, I really like your story. I wouldn't have you change any of it and I can't wait until you finish it.
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Reviewed By: Koga or Kouga/ Kouga's Girl On: April 22, 2006 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING IT IS REALLY GOOD SO FAR!!!
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Reviewed By: KIttenFLuff On: April 20, 2006 19:42 EDT
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You cant just abaned this story! It would not be right for the people who love/like it. I enjoy it very much so. So please keep it up for us. Forget the losers who flame. For the flamers:: DONT READ IF YOU DONT LIKE!!!! *bows* thank you.
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