| "The Hidden Past, The Hopeful Future" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose_15 On: March 23, 2006 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: shuillin On: March 21, 2006 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great chapter! oh and the wait for the next chapter was worth it.
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Reviewed By: shuillin On: March 09, 2006 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS KEWL!!!!oh, and thx for answerin mai questions!^-^.... pwease update soon!im itchin to know![no seriously, i'm itchin]
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Reviewed By: sweetmangos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Hey Fox, you have to hurry and update. I want to know what happens so so so bad. Laters Smooches
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: hackneyqueenextreme(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. you must write more. i just have to know what happens next. i agree with you on the waiting and short chapters bit. when the updated chapters are short you just feel sad that you had to wait so long for so little. please update soon. -tabs-
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Reviewed By: shuillin On: March 02, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was pretty cool.but....say, werent those pretty harsh words for 5 year olds?lol.maybe not.mai naighbor's kid knos a few words and he was 3 wen he started from the letter "F".newai, i knew u werent dead.[yusuke:[opens mouth]]maybe he did, but i didnt.[yusuke:-_-[closes mouth]].newai, great chappie.^_^
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Reviewed By: tsuki-tora (not logged in) On: February 20, 2006 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, and I keep wondering how you find the time to update...-_- Update asap! ^_~
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Reviewed By: shuillin On: February 19, 2006 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was cool!i love your series!newai, that part wid the skateboard was funni!!!!update soon, plz!
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Title: whoop!!!
Reviewed By: shuillin On: February 16, 2006 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome!hope to read more!
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Reviewed By: CynicalStrawberry [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 17:57 CST
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Hm...This is really interesting and good but one question...do you have a beta? Anyways, rave reviews
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Reviewed By: sweetmangos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 03:06 CST
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awwww, it ended so quickly. Awesomeness. I can't wait to see the rest of the story. =D
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Reviewed By: shuillin On: February 05, 2006 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one1and good luck in the funeral[not to mention the car ride].hope uhm...your family and the other ppl feel better and so do you.hope ur uhm...grandma i think it was is happy even tho she's dead and nice chapter.hope you can update as soon as you and your family feel better.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: mouse2k On: February 03, 2006 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would put a rateing higher then ten cause i really liked this fanfic so far and right now i would like to say THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITEING THIS YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY SOOOOOOOO MUCH BETTER!!!! lol ^^; i love it plz update cause sometimes ppl have this really awesome fic and thats rare and they dont update and that bits big time !
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Title: Zircrubyon agen
Reviewed By: shuillin On: January 31, 2006 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sup!newai, i realli liked it.and the part bout hiei falling from the tree, that was WHOLESOME!!!!LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTERS!
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Reviewed By: tsuki-tora (not logged in On: January 30, 2006 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Update soon! I love this story! Youko will probably be really smug when he finds out he is right and Shuuchi is wrong.
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