| "A Light in the Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 13:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great I hope that you are able to update very soon I lovwe how you have writen this story so far.
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Reviewed By: key key On: July 28, 2007 11:49 EDT
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really good but i wonder whses older shippo or shen
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: YugureIko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 00:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story, itself, however the way you presented it didn't make it very believable. Like InuYasha being swayed so easily to try and kill Kagome or Kikyou even telling him to do so, or Kagome trying to kill herself. And as a Kikyou fan, you bashing her so much is making me dislike parts of the story just a little. A little OOC (out of character) action, and the crossover idea as well as the main pairing are a bit over-used. Plus it had some minor errors, here and there but overall it was enjoyable. I really liked the Yuri lime action, though I'd like to see Hiei give some lovin'(Hiei Fan). I'm somewhat interested in seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Azera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 09:01 EDT
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Wow. So what color are Kagome's eyes in this then? And what was the deal with her tears? Also, when does she get the rest of her soul back and Inu gets whats comming to him? As you can see, I love this story, so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 03:25 EDT
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i like this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 02:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this was really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 20:16 EDT
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loves the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Mya Uzo On: June 30, 2007 15:48 EDT
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eh I dont mind the wait
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Reviewed By: Hime-Jun-Hi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH!!!! OH!!!! HIE/KAGOME LEMMONY mateing plz?!!!! oh.... and NO MORE yuri..... plz.....? blagh!
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Title: A Light In The Dark
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 04:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Chapter 5(4)
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to read what happens with everyone. Wonder what they will do to Inuyasha if they meet up with him. If not Hiei/Kagome/Kurama pair Kurama with Shippous' aunt.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 20:46 EDT
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please pleaseplease update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo!!! This can't be the end, it just can't!! Please update, I know that you probably get this a lot but this is one of the most fantastic fics that I've read and I want.... no NEED! to know what it is that happens! If you need anything at all, all you have to do is simply email me at either inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com or love_is_forever_1357@hotmail.com... Love Always, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 14:16 EST
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Okay. I had forgotten the Kagome/Arashi interaction in chapter 4. Still not quite comfortable with the way that happened -- Kagome didn't even KNOW her -- that seems WAY out of character, even if she decided she might be bisexual. Being bisexual (or lesbian) shouldn't also make her "loose," and the idea of Kagome having an intimate, sexual experiendce with someone she just met is really weird, and a bit off-putting. Granted, she was feeling sad and lonely, but that really makes it seem like Arashi took advantage of her. Of course, she apologised, and Kagome forgave her, but I hope that's all there was to it. I really hope it was a 1-time thing and not going to play into the Kag/Hiei relationship that was developing so nicely. I was SO liking the idea of her and Hiei together, and since you had removed Kurama from the equation, I was hoping for a one-on-one relationship. And you still seem to be planning to put them together in this latest chapter. (I HOPE so!!) I like the emphasis you've put on her tears, and I liked Hiei's thoughts that he knew why the hanyou made her cry -- VERY interesting and original! I'm looking forward to seeing her eventually meet back up with the one-armed Inuyasha and Kikyou. there's a lot of good stuff in this fic, and I can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 13:34 EST
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Just had to re-read this story. Love the second chapter!! Hyper, chocolate-frenzied Shippou is SO funny! "Power to the little people." And: "Onward to the bathroom to make me squeaky clean." Those are just classic lines. Forgot that Hiei had already undressed and dressed her once. Heh heh! No bra. Gee, Kurama sure gave her up easily, didn't he? Of course, that works for Hiei! Yay! Got to finish the other chapters so it's all fresh in my mind -- ready for the NEXT chapter!
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