| "A Light in the Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: gintawolfdemon On: February 11, 2006 17:56 EST
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please update this story soon i want to know what happens as soon as they arrive
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Title: keep going
Reviewed By: sesskags4ever-not logged in- On: February 05, 2006 01:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. This is a cute crossover so far. It has the angst but you throw enough humor in to lighten things up. Great job. I look forward to more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 01:59 EST
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I like it. This is a cute crossover so far. It has the angst but you throw enough humor in to lighten things up. Great job. I look forward to more chapters.
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 22:19 EST
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. i love this story so far. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 10:16 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
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Well...this was broing. I fell asleep after reading the first chapter. Inuyasha sees Kikyo behind Kagome's back, he's gonna kill her, that is SO original.
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: January 16, 2006 23:52 EST
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hahah that was soo funny. kurama's hair is pretty red you know? hahahah. plz update soon
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Reviewed By: little mouse1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story. please update.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 04:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: blackshadowz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 22:11 EST
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I would definitely suggest spacing out your chapters because it's very difficult to read when it is in one huge paragraph. There were a few spelling errors. Overall this piece of fanfiction is better than most but definitely deserves some tweaking.
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Reviewed By: Constructive On: December 29, 2005 02:33 EST
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It's called a paragraph, hun. I read the first sentence, but that's when I realized that you glomped everything together, so I skipped to the review. Seriously, it really drives people away when you don't seperate your story into paragraphs.
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Reviewed By: somethin' On: December 29, 2005 00:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting and funny.. update soon!
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Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: December 25, 2005 23:43 EST
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Yo! Thats... uhhh.. diff'rent...lol
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net On: December 16, 2005 20:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what Inuyasha tries to do to Kagome now that she will be protected by the Yu yu gang, what Naraku will do and how you get Hiei/Kagome together.
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