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Reviewed By: Serene_Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really enjoyed this fic! I love the way you portrayed Inuyasha and Kagome! Especially with the Instant messages XD! inu_puppy XD excellent. I can't wait to read more of it!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Wolf On: December 15, 2005 19:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Wounderful keep writing
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Reviewed By: Ferror On: December 15, 2005 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic i love it and cant wait please update soon
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Title: pamsonly
Reviewed By: pamsonly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!! Bravo!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: pams-only On: December 14, 2005 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO!!! I really enjoyed reading your story. I was hooked on it from the start. You had used comedy ( I was laughing so hard, I had tears in my eyes), anxiety, anger and jealousy in your story. You used so many emotions in your story that is why I could not stop reading. This is a great story. Please update soon.
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Title: O_o
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: December 14, 2005 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my gosh. This is...such an unbelievably GREAT story. Honestly, I don't understand why this fanfic has so little reviews. It certainly deserves much much more than 4 reviews. Anyways, I think you are a great writer. Beside from some spelling errors, everything else was perfect. Theh storyline is interesting and keeps you hooked, and the phrasing of the story is also great: not too choppy and easy to understand. Just because this story does not have many reviews, it does not mean people are not enjoying it. Please, keep writing and I'm sure the story will be a big hit soon. Update soon please, many people are waiting for it :]
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ezaangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 06:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW is all i can honestly say, this story is brilliant,everything about it is fantastic and all in one day,you are amazing girl (lol) i hope your baby gets better. i love the way you keep the characters to there original personalities, i also love the way kagomes and inuyashas romance begun. keep updating and ill keep reviewing, if its alright with you when i update my own story ill tell people about your FANTASTIC story. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. ezaangel
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow. i got to seriously give you props. when i first started reading, i really thougth i was being dragged, no offense, into a mediocer highschool fiction story written in cyber linguistics. Then...it was like getting hit by an 18 wheeler. BAM! completely blind sided...and in all the right ways! This story is excellent! i read it straight through for like, what...an hour and a half? you have a wonderful story here; you're characters are defined to a T (and let me say, reading an inuYasha who isn't some male whore or deranged playboy {i admit i write him that way} is a nice fresh breath)! Your setting is very well described and the plot hardly contains holes. i really can't wait to see where you take this story! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: gab-bie On: December 13, 2005 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great story i absoulutly loved it,i will have to mention this story to my friends so expect more reviews gab
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Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe my pen name thingy is almost like Inu's haha...ahem anyway. but your story is really cute. i loved the convo they had about the age thing. that made me laugh out loud. and oh yes i can honestly picture inuyasha as a modle...::wipes drool:: :)
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