| "Becoming the Image" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelEyes1223 On: December 21, 2005 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Nice. It was very interesting how you added the romance and humor in the story with the situation the characters are in.I also love how you made the fedual era chracter's have the job in the present time connect somewhat to the people the act like in the past.. It almost seems as if the really were there! Again.. Very nice and I can not wait to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Angel~of~Fire On: December 21, 2005 01:52 CST
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that great please update really soon
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Reviewed By: gab-bie On: December 20, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really great keep writing and dont ever be dicouraged from flames because this story is awesome.you really have a talent for writing and i will definitely need to tell everyone of my MM friends about this story okz.
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 17:52 CST
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omg! I finished reading cp 6 and then u put in amazing cp 7!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can you put in cp 8 now???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 17:52 CST
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omg! I finished reading cp 6 and then u put in amazing cp 7!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can you put in cp 8 now???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 17:46 CST
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omg, its sooooooo amazing, you have to write more.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Me On: December 19, 2005 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is really interesting! Please update soon. Also, the 5th chapter is the same as the 4th so...
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lap dance...lol....Penut butter....lol omg i love it. ") update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: kagomedragonfiress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this such a good story all your storys are great and if kagome name inuysha then bet inuyasha would get mad im try to picture his face if she did lol lol
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Reviewed By: Az On: December 15, 2005 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story so far the concept sounds really cute, plus its original considering all the love hate relationships found in fanfics so far are only in high school, whereby only one character is more dominante than the other whereby becoming stuck with each other later on and thus falling in love, but yours sounds original cuz the characters already kno each other and the hate's been fuelled for a while so falling for each other is more of an obstacle! great work so far please continue ^_^!!
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow thats was a kool story and that was so cutie when inu bought kag tha puppy!! I hope u update soon Cause this is a really good and cutie story so Update soon!!!
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