| "Becoming the Image" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Me On: December 19, 2005 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is really interesting! Please update soon. Also, the 5th chapter is the same as the 4th so...
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lap dance...lol....Penut butter....lol omg i love it. ") update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: kagomedragonfiress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this such a good story all your storys are great and if kagome name inuysha then bet inuyasha would get mad im try to picture his face if she did lol lol
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Reviewed By: Az On: December 15, 2005 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story so far the concept sounds really cute, plus its original considering all the love hate relationships found in fanfics so far are only in high school, whereby only one character is more dominante than the other whereby becoming stuck with each other later on and thus falling in love, but yours sounds original cuz the characters already kno each other and the hate's been fuelled for a while so falling for each other is more of an obstacle! great work so far please continue ^_^!!
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow thats was a kool story and that was so cutie when inu bought kag tha puppy!! I hope u update soon Cause this is a really good and cutie story so Update soon!!!
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