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| "Look After You" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 22:39 CST
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Well, I read this whole story in about an hour and a half. I thought it was great!! I also think it's so cute the way you mention ppl and specifically respond to thier reviews...so cute. Anyway, I can't believe you are only 15, of course, I guess I was full of ideas and talent when I was young too!!! Not that I'm old, as I feel age is not necessarily defined by the actual numer of years we have lived but the life we've lived in those years and our outlook about it. So, enough rambling...I will read the other FMA stories and I also can't wait to read the InuYasha story, (InuYasha is my fave!!!). K.... so keep writing!
| Reviewed By: Marmalade4712 On: February 20, 2006 19:01 CST
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I really liked this story and I hope you make that sequel, that you said you'd make, sometime soon. But other than that, I loved this story.
| Reviewed By: arris On: January 31, 2006 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your stories especially since you took the time to make them intertwine to each other. You are a very talented writer and i hope you keep writing fan fics.
| Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 11:00 CST
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I love it! I love it! I love it! Oh please write more. I can't wait to see Ed's reaction!
| Reviewed By: Nova Dragon On: January 05, 2006 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just wanted to say I thought "Look After You" was awesome! I think its really well written and couldn't stop reading once I started. I like the way you've made Riza much more experienced than other authors do, I agree with what you said in one of your notes they always seem to make her inexperienced and shy when it comes to relationships. I can't wait to read the sequel :). Oh and also could you possibly email me a link to your Loving a Dog of the Military fic? I'm a huge EdXWinry fan and would love to read it. However I can't find it on here even when I type the name into the search box If you could possibly email me a link at a_reb@hotmail.com (sorry for asking but I really would like to read it) Thanks in advance Ok I think I've rambled abit to much lol Nova Dragon
| Reviewed By: Tasogare no Tsubasa On: December 24, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not going to spoil anything for you, but I think by the series is done, you'll be bursting with new ideas for your sequel. ;) Anyway, I think I'll head right over and read some more of your work, and (hopefully) become a better fan fic writer through your examples! BTW, in case you were wondering, Tasogare no Tsubasa means "Wings of Twilight" or "Twilight Wings." I'm srt of in a DN Angel kick right now, which you should read and watch, if you haven't already!
| Title: Lovin it
Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 00:37 CST
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I really like this story. I keep waiting for Ed and Winry to show back up. Oh, and how come you didn't mention me? I love your stories and try to review every time. Pleeeeeeeeeese, can I have my name on there too? Can I, can I, can I, can I please????? hehehe. Write soon!
| Reviewed By: Tasogare no Tsubasa On: December 22, 2005 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a new reviewer, but I started reading your fanfic, and I could not stop. Please update soon, I would really really like to see what happens, and will we be hearing any more about Ed?
| Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only saw one mistake and I can't remember if it was this chapter or the first one. But you out "your" instead of "you're". But hey, I know that when I get on a writing streak I put the wrong one too. I just get in a hurry. But I love the story. And I really love how you are putting the stories together. I bet by the time you're finished you could put all the stories together and make one big tale. I'm so proud of you, Brynn. You're doing great. I hope to update my story soon but I have a four month old son and working nearly full time at Walmart so I don't get to write as much as I'd like. The chapters I posted were written before-hand. Like three years before hand. I am using this site as a way to encourage my own writing. If you think my story is worthy, please recommend it to others. I don't have many reviews. But then again, not a lot of people get on here to read original material. Anyway, thank you for writing. I really enjoy the way you write and the stories you have to tell. I can't wait to find out what happens with Ed and Winry and the one on the way. Hope to read more from you soon, Jessica
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