| "Unexpected Love" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: please update if u have a heart
Reviewed By: kunai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 03:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it rocked please update or i will be depressed please hurry don't be heartless
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Reviewed By: remb On: February 01, 2006 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well to start off i loved the fan fic it had over all others i've read so far the best composure and believe me i read most of the fanfics from this site so far and it's the best one here
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Reviewed By: remb On: February 01, 2006 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well to start off i loved the fan fic it had over all others i've read so far the best composure and believe me i read most of the fanfics from this site so far and it's the best one here
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Reviewed By: allyfoxfire101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! i think u did a great job in writing this!!! i wish to read more chapters please !!!! please keep writing im waiting for the next chapter to come!!! I WANNA READ IT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil_Pix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 21:50 CST
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yay!! its been so long since I myself have been able 2 get a chance 2 read much so I was glad you updated! I love your story, please keep it up!!
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Title: Hi and I love your story!
Reviewed By: Inulvr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I love your story! Keep writing...please! Update soon!
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Title: :^)
Reviewed By: kaerubasho On: January 08, 2006 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! This is my first time reading a kakasaku fic. I eagerly await your next chapter! So pleeeaaase continue...
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Reviewed By: Mokomi__x [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your stories, they are very orginal, I was instantly hooked when my friend showed me this site, keep up the good work!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Hott mama On: January 01, 2006 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY I LOVECD IT (omg i'm mad my username on here got banned no clue why) PLEASE UPDATE i hope i can find you since i can't add you to my favorites now!!
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Reviewed By: Lil_Pix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 14:01 CST
Comment/Review:
More like cute actually lol. I love your story. Cant wait for an unpdate!
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Title: whoa....man...thats good
Reviewed By: ally5090 On: December 30, 2005 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude.... u ever...ya know ...think of writing a book????? ID SO READ IT!!!!!!!!!! ur words....i can visulies in my head....Y CANT I WRITE LIKE THAT DAMN IT!?!?!?!?! please...keep writing.....i...will admit....i don't like the pairing....but it is a good story.....ur style of wrting and creativity is WAY better than a 10 man...... please im waiting for the next chapter to come out.....
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Title: Whoo...
Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. This was the first fanfic I've read today that I think actually deserved a 10 out of 10 rating for all catergories. I love this fanfic. I'm not usually a big fan of kakasaku, but I'll make an exception. Keep those chapters coming!
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Reviewed By: Lil_Pix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 19:35 CST
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luv the story! I really hope you update soon I cant wait to see what happens next. Merry christmas 2 u 2!!
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Title: yaya!
Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is really good. i can't wait for the next chapter. tootles pootles.
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Title: Something Helpful
Reviewed By: Oneesan no Miroku Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 21:49 CST
Comment/Review:
You've got a pretty nice story here. You're in character also, which is a plus on my part, because I can't stand OOC fanfics. Tsunada is supposed to be Tsunade. As a fellow KakaSaku writer (just updated Lessons in Shinobi Love, actually) I'm all formore fanfics on the couple and I encourage you to write more. Have considered a beta reader? They are very helpful and go through your mistakes so your story looks good when you submit it. Also, you might want to put more space between your paragraphs so it is more readable. If you want, I could beta read your story. If you do want my help, please e-mail me at GuitarFan101@aol.com. I'd be happy to help you out for characterization questions, storyline and beta reading. Do write more. ~Melissa~ *Kaka/Saku writer*
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