| "The Price of Freedom" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Night Star On: February 26, 2006 13:11 CST
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I just finished reading all the chapters before leaving this review. Your story was interesting but your lemons were on the short side and need a little more work but with more practice you'll be able to do it. It wasn't bad for the first time. Other than that you're fic was pretty good. For lemon referance, you should either watch soft porn on Showtime or Cinamax, henti, read eroctica novels or read henti manga. That's what I do when I have to write a lemon and when I need ideas. I'm really hoping that you update this fic soon because I really want to see how this ends.
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Title: UPDATE SOON
Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 17:17 CST
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LOVE IT! please please please please please please update. update update update update update update update update update update. K im done. Please do update. ------ ToDifferentToBeReal The early bird may get the worm, but the late rising worm lives
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Reviewed By: Teela [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 18:13 CST
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omg please continue pleeeeeeeeease ~*~
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 17:46 CST
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you have to update again asap. I really love this story. 'laughs manically' and i don't have the excuse of my sanity any more. ToDifferentToBeReal --- If life gives you lemons, throw them back and say make your own god damned lemonade.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic and I want to know how it ends. I want to see how Kags deals with Kikyo and what Sess find out about Naraku.
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Title: Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: didi45 On: January 06, 2006 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!!!!!!! Your style is captivating and the story is very tasteful. I can't wait to see what happens next and, Rin/Sess is my favorite pairing. Please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Aineko666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. The style is wonderful and it is so nice to read something that has been thought through. I've gotten so tired of reading stories with horrible grammar. A breath of fresh air!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 18:32 CST
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UPDATE!......UPDATE!........hehe...he...ha for the sake of my sanity. 'laughs maniccally' okay i don't have any sanity left in me so just update soon please. 'breaks down and cries' hehe sorry 'snaps back to emotionless mentally insane self' Sanity calms, but madness is so much more interesting. :|
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Reviewed By: ikkdsra On: December 27, 2005 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!! unlike mystories ;_; anyway u have to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 15:06 CST
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You have to have to update please please I want to see this fic finished.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Chinina-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it please right more chapters!!
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 07:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really love this story! You must continue I have read soo many good stories that the author never finishes and you have to finish this because it is awesome. I write too and no matter how many or how little 'grumbles at reviewers from her story' I get I always update the chap because even if I would like more reviews than just 1 or 2 I at least know that I have 1 or 2 people out there who do want to read my story and that I want to update my story because I love to write. :D Update soon! ToDifferentToBeReal------------------- If life gives you lemons, throw them at someone.
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Reviewed By: seeker34 (not logged on) On: December 16, 2005 07:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great plot, love the humor and well writen. I've really enjoyed keep it up!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original! This story is great! I absolutely can't wait for more! The shopping moments with Jaken was hilarious and I LOVE Izayoi's personality! Great jobs! Update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: Goodluck On: December 15, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very interesting plot for your story and I only have one problem with it. (Though even the problem is pretty insignificant.) Rin is cold in Japanese. I say this not to be insulting, but to show the irony of the situation.
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