| "What Happened To Innocent Life?" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: May 25, 2006 15:57 CDT
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I like this story - especially the idea of a demon being half priesstess being bad,it's a really neat idea. I hope you continue this story. - Cochrann
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Reviewed By: §-⌡↑+♦-♫╪»▓ On: May 25, 2006 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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the only reason y i give it a one on enjoyment is the fact that inuyasha hurt kagome other than that i thought it was a good but if u keep writing i dont want to read abbout inuyasha hurting kagome anymore that would piss me off and also get kagome and inuyasha together and have then raise the pup i think that would be good for this story and for god sakes have inuyasha feel horriably for for hurting her and have kagome make him feel better lol i like it wen that happens
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 16:42 CDT
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hurry back , i love this story.
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Reviewed By: Angle~of~Light On: January 06, 2006 00:04 CST
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awwww that was so cute i love your story hope you update son
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Reviewed By: Red Kitsune Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 17:41 CST
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A few spelling errors, but an overall sweet and good chapter.
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Reviewed By: LOVING THIS STORY On: January 01, 2006 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY KEEP WRITING!!! THIS STORY IS TH BOMB!! The only one i liked with a kid in it. LOL
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Title: I loved this story
Reviewed By: Mariainuyasha On: December 27, 2005 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey I liked your fan fic so far and I would enjoy reading some more so please finish the story so others like myself can read this story by the way I liked your story a lot. Bye.
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Shiira On: December 25, 2005 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT'S GRRREEEEEAAAATTTT!!! PLEASE FINISH THE STORY!! I GAVE YOU ALL 10 CUZ YOUR STORY IS REALLY GOOD LOL!! YOU'RE ALOT BETTER THAN I AM.....IF I WOULD'VE WROTE A STORY..ABOUT INUYASHA.UHH.ERMM..YEAH BUT PLEASE FINISH IT IT'S GOING REALLY WELL!! I'LL BE BACK TO CHECK UP ON YOU FOR UPDATES :]
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Shiira On: December 25, 2005 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's grrrrrrrreeeeeeeattt!!! please finish the story!! you're a really good writer!! I RATED YOU ALL 10 CUZ I LOVE THE STORIES!! PLEASE FINISH IT!! I'LL BE BACK TO CHECK UPON YOU :]
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Reviewed By: kidkool On: December 19, 2005 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this story was really good I really think you should continue
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 01:46 CST
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I like your story. Please finish it.
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Title: good idea
Reviewed By: Raikor and taikor inc (logged off) On: December 17, 2005 00:19 CST
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i'd jave to day you have a realy good idea going here and i would love to see this story continued and eventauly finished.
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Reviewed By: hotun_raider [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 17:31 CST
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yeah,you should continue. I like it. yur a good writer-better than i am anyways,but...also better than some other stories ive read
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Title: bhhh
Reviewed By: gbggfgf On: December 16, 2005 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good and yes u should continue
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Title: clothing
Reviewed By: kytenluvinu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 15:51 CST
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Inuyasha's top is called a hatori and his pants are called hakamas I think is shirt underneath is just a shirt any way nice story
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