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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 00:45 CDT
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Chapter 8 was really good because it explained all the theory really well. I like this story because it shows the difference between magic and alchemy. I like how it explains that alchemy has to be practiced and learned; you're not just born with the knowledge. I think that's one of the things that wizards and withes take for granted and don't really think about, which must unbearable for Ed. I mean he thinks about everything in a scientific way and is really smart and for him to see that just anybody can use magic without really thinking about it would make him understandably very...angry. Anyway it's a really good story! Man you can write!
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 23:16 CDT
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This absolutely the best fanfiction I've ever read!!!!!!!! I am not saying that to be nice either, it's true!!! I could never enjoy Harry Potter or FMA this much if they were by themselves and thats saying alot if you've ever seen me read Harry Potter!
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Title: (yay)
Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 22:46 CDT
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OMG!!!!! I was dying to write this! It's like if I don't write it the energy behind the words will burst out of my chest and kill me!!! OMG! I am such a Harry Potter fan it's actually a little sad. It's cool how they used a portkey to get to hogwarts. I think it's a little out-of-character for Dumbledore to warn the students that the military were trained to kill for 2 reasons: 1)Dumbledore would never allow anyone to be killed or fatally wounded deliberatly on hogwarts grounds, and 2)because I dought that anyone of those characters from FMA would try to hurt a child. On the upside, the style of writing is spot-on. I don't think I've seen anybody write so close to the Harry Potter style before. Also, the speech before the feast is pretty much exactly the way it was in the sixth book. You even put the phrase "tuck in" in there! Good job! I think you've got the Harry Potter thing down. Very satisfying, except for the part where you killed Al...But I guess I could forgive you for that; I mean it had to happen sometime right? I'm just glad that when it did Harry Potter was there to comfort me...(lol) Onto chapter three!!!(^_^) I'm sorry but I'm a Harry Potter freak so I have to say this: HARRY POTTER ROCKS!!!!!!!!! (couldn't help myself)
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Title: (!!!)
Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 22:24 CDT
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i just read the first chapter and before i continue i feel i must write this: HOW COULD YOU KILL AL?????????????????????????????????????????????????? I mean c'mon!!!! But you needn't worry...I'm not the kind of person that would throw anything worse than a video tape at you but you might wanna watch out for a few of my friends (lol!). Anyway, there's no more point in writing this as i've already said what I wanted you to read so without further complaints i shall read the next chapter...
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Title: Satisfied
Reviewed By: ~Wit On: August 13, 2007 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome end to an awesome story. a tiny bit rushed,though. Do you have a sequel in mind? gee, I wish that Harry, Hermione and Ron had come into contact with him a little bit more than that. I mean, they only saw each other a few times! I was mildly dissapointed that it had to end, but the ending phrase was wholly satisfying. Thank you for a good read to pass the time. ;)
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Reviewed By: Anime1girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. I hope you update the next chapter. I really can't wait for it.
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Reviewed By: ohscrewit WRITE MORE On: June 19, 2007 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh for the love of all things good in this world, a cliffhanger??!! PLEASE HURRY!!!!
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 04:02 CDT
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First off, I would like to say that I squealed with happiness when I saw you updated; this was the very first HPFMA crossover that I ever read, and it consequently got me absolutely hooked on them (I retreated into my room and read for five days straight). xD This latest chapter was excellent, as always, and even though I was hoping for some more Malfoy vs. Ed, having Envy burst in during a lesson was great! I'll definately be sad to see this story end, but I'm sure you'll go out with a bang! Good luck with any writer's block!
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Reviewed By: ~Mari-chan~ On: June 12, 2007 11:58 CDT
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I can't say that I really saw it comming but I was hopeing that either Envy or Scar showed up, though I was wishing that they would do it in the Great Hall where everyone would be able to see the fight. I can't wait until the next chapter!! I absolutly love your style of writting!! Thank you so much for updating this fic, if you ever need anything then just simply ask.. Yours always, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: yaminorose On: June 11, 2007 21:42 CDT
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Wow, really didn't see that coming. I truly like your style of writing you have done a great job of combining to polar opposite stories while still sticking to the styles the authors intended. I'm truly sorry this is the last chapter, as there are very few well written FMA/HP crossovers, if you wouldn't mind rethinking a sequel, it would be apperciated. Okay, that's all I got
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Reviewed By: ChaosChiq [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 08:53 CDT
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Love the story, congrats on graduation, and I hope you do decide to update soon. Sorry in a rush but I had just enough time to read ;P
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 10:26 CDT
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Once again, totally worth the wait. Ed's musings on the equivalency of magic were particularly well thought out. I love your style and can safely say I'd read pretty much anything you'd write. The quote from MacBeth was an excellent addition too.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 23:26 CDT
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OMG this is possibly the best fic...Harry Potter or FMA that I have ever read!!! I can't wait to see what happens! PLEASE update this fic and don't leave it alone, I hate it when the best fics just stop for one reason or another. I will do anything you ask, just continue this fic... With love, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 21:45 CDT
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Quick correction: Edward is an officer (as opposed to enlisted personnel), he holds the rank of Major. Thus, to leave military service, he would have to "resign his commission" not "enlistment"
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 22:40 CDT
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I did pay attention to all of your A/N and am making this longer than ten words. As such, I am expecting you to update sooner than two months from now. I just found your story today and am pleased to say that I like your style and the story, it may not be long or romantic, but I find that if you are able to convey emotion without drabbling like a mindless fool it is a very good thing. It seems that you have a few missed words and a couple of spelling errors but I have definitely read worse (shudders at the memory). I loved the way you ended chapter eight, is the cat the color of Al's eyes? I don't know because I've read and seen it where his eyes (when he had his body) were gray or blue or golden or brown so I am really not sure. I need to stop now, or this will be the longest review I have ever left, and trust me that is long... So, faster updates gets you more reviews haha =)
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