| "Here Comes Santa Claws" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: dreamer_anime_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 22:20 EDT
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Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease add another chapter. Add one or I will explode! Oh, and by the way, great chapter.
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 18:57 EDT
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you need to update! i love this story, but you haven't updated for so long! cole on! i wanna another! >< Manga Girl
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Reviewed By: Palo On: May 17, 2006 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!!! Psst...i love your food for thought.
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 16:36 EDT
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I saw you on a new Inuyasha forum and remembered this story. It's been a while since I caught up with it. You're doing great with the characterization even though this is an AU. Kanna is particularly creepy. I like what you have so far. Please continue. Thanks. :)
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 19:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This si gettign really interesting! Please update again soon!!! :D
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Reviewed By: clavira89 On: March 08, 2006 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...hello? Is anybody here? I, uh, just wanted to say that I kinda like this story and I was wondering if you're gonna update? (Actually, it was HILARIOUS! Santa Claws - I was close to death because I was laughing so hard, my cat still looks at me as if I had gone nuts... stupid cat, he's just hungry. Though I am a bit disappointed that they didn't kiss "beneath" the mistletoe...) Hope you update soon! clavira
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 19:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I must admit, when I first read the title, I was a bit thrown off. Ah, but good things do come in odd packages, ne? This is a very good story. One that completely threw me off. InuYasha? As Santa? Or rather Santa's' helper, and Kaede is Santa? Either way, the story is great. And Ive enjoyed it immensely. I love the interaction between all the characters. Cant wait to see where you take them next. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 20:50 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is an interesting blend of Inuyasha and the stories of christmas. I think that it has a LOT of potential and I look forward to reading more of it. I think that you have worked rather hard at showing agentler side of Inu, but without his showing it out loud. It is more like a whisper than anything, but it is a good whisper. I especially liked when he came back from patrol and the children glomped around him. If he were really all mean and grouchy all the time, they wouldn't do that, even if he was 'Santa', they would stay away. I think that scene, more than any other that you have written shows the whisper of gentleness in Inuyasha. Another thing that I think shows some real potential is the idea that you have come up with as far as how people came here and why they stay and how time works there. Interesting. The only real negative that I have seen about this story is Kagmom's reaction, or lack thereof, to Kagome's disappearance. It just seemed a little off to me, but you are the author. Thanks for writing for us. I look forward to reading more of this later. Caitriona
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Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: Jozz On: January 14, 2006 17:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that your story was awesome!You should really write more.
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Reviewed By: Akakoken On: January 12, 2006 23:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love everything!! Mwahahahahaa!! o.o...*blink blink*...Everything about this fic, I mean. I just started reading it the other day, but I think that it's really awsome. Very original idea, compared to everything else I've read so far, and the whole Kanna thing right now is very mysterious, which is good, really good. Not to mention the whole Inuyasha/Kagome thing going on, with the arguing and Inuyasha being all protective and stuff...the spelling and grammar's really good too. I think I've only seen about 2 mistakes, and I can't even remember what they are, hehe. I also really like the style of your writing, because it's not too descriptive, but it still good for helping me visualize everything. Although, I keep picutring Inuyasha in a big red suit...I'm having trouble fitting the beard into that picture, though...heh heh. Anyways, keep up the great work, I'm really looking forward to more chapters!!
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Title: ch 8
Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: January 08, 2006 13:33 EST
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Another couple of good chapters. Kanna is really starting to get creepy, what with her non-existent being. Question: if someone were to happen upon her hiding place, would they be able to see her since she has no aura except for the magic mirror she has? Since Inu and Kaede have both felt a disturbance, will Kagome notice it too, seeing as she is untrained, and does Miroku have any spiritual powers in this fic? Speaking of Miroku, how did he come to live there, or will you address that in future chapters? Keep up the good work, looking forward to more twists and turns. Just stay away from plunnies!
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Title: luv it
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 21:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just luv it pls continue pls *smile*
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: January 03, 2006 10:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, especially with your food for thoughts. ^_^ big smile! and btw, kagome, kiss him. hahaha.... cya bbbeleana ps. are you gonna continue your other stories like on the leash?
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Reviewed By: illnevertell On: January 03, 2006 07:46 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!!! its such a cute story i just can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Xia-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 23:13 EST
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KISS HIM KAGOME!! I'll Trade places with you!!! Lol, Love the story
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