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Title: OH MY!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It's very interesting and I look forward to reading more.
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Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 23:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like Sesshoumaru got a swift kick in the pants. I kinda felt sorry for him when it hurt his feelings, but he's still the stupid jerk that won't own up to even having feelings. But, you know, I've actually met a man like that. It seems that what Inuyasha said hit him like a ton of bricks. Ooooh, Inu's demon side really pisses me off. I just wanted to knock his lights out when he started berating Inu. I'm surprised that Sesshoumaru didn't. After all, it was his mate that was being insulted. This is so confusing. I think that it is time for me to go back and read the entire fic at once. I think that I'm losing the train. However, I was amused at Sesshoumaru's reactions and it was funny that he was blaming his emotions on fatigue. It was sad when he realized that what Inuyasha was saying was coming straight from the heart, so to speak. *sigh* I think that I feel sorry for them both. I'll be glad to be getting out of Inuyasha's head though. It's weird in there! LOL Just kidding. I enjoyed Sesshoumaru's POV very much. Can't wait to see where you take it from here! Snow
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Title: Finally, an update XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 25, 2006 08:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaaaaa!!!! You finally got Sesshomaru's POV in there. I imagen doing his POV is alot harder than doing Inuyasha's, espashally when your trying to give him an air of pain, or of careing. I think you really captured it while keeping him in character, as for the modern phrases you mentioned, I think you would havta point them out for anyone to notice. ^^' Beautiful job as always!!!!!! XD XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 17:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant wait for the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 14:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DEEP! It took me four days to get though this masterpiece, and all I could think of is I hope InuYasha can come to some peace with his life and his brother/mate. I'd hate to see those two not workout. Newt chapter soon please!
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Reviewed By: Russanya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. It is actually after reading this that I was moved to write again. It got me through a lot of really hard times at the end of my semester, having something that I could read and feel hope for. I know that might sound strange, but it did. Update whenever you feel is alright. It is always worth the wait Russanya
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Reviewed By: the tell-tale kitten On: May 19, 2006 05:43 PDT
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Hmm..I don't know when you plan on updating, but hopefully it will be soon. I have wated a very long time for an update, if you've stopped with the production of the story I wish you'd say so. I want to see what happens next and what's going on with all these others in Inuyasha's head, I understand who they are adn why they are there, I just want to hear more about them.
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Title: AWESOME STORY!
Reviewed By: Jubes On: May 15, 2006 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, this is your loyal fan!! I am so happy you made this story, I dont think there are enough INu/sessh stories out there. And you are a great writer. My overall rating was a 10, however the reason my enjoyment factor was a 7...was because there were some points that FOR ME personally...they lost my interest. Like, for example when you finished writing a chapter from yashas point of view, then next chapter you start writing about what Sessh was feeling, thru out the whole ordeal of the last chapter. Those parts are really what bothers me...it gets repetitive...not in words...but in like...I start feeling...GET TO THE POINT. I hope that didn't sound bad, because I do love your story, I did after all read each and every chapter. YOu are an awesome reader, I just thought that perhaps you would like to know my opinion on the matter, weathear you ignore me or not, its your choice. Over all, you are a great writer, I think you have originality! I havne't quite read a story like this. And over all I just the fact that your spelling and Grammer is just...AWESOME. O_O I like your style of writing too...SO you are a great writer to me...I will continue to read your story. So UPDATE SOON, cause i find myself to be adicted!! =D
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Title: It's got to get better!
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that's so awful; I hope your daughter is feeling better this week! Please let her know that all of us are wishing her a speedy recovery. And when she's starting to feel like she can zip around on crutches, please remind her to be extra careful!! It's all too possible to have a second fall and get hurt more. Yeah, I have a friend who has been there and done that number this week! Ack! Where is Sturaki? Please say that she is in there somewhere too - the boys need her as a mediator! And what about the swan demoness? What does she specilize in? Inuyasha is spilling his guts out about the whole situation and it looks like Sesshoumaru is just about to loose it now that he knows Inu's reasoning. Another evil cliffie ;-) Concentrate on your family; we will happily await your next chapter. A happy you, makes for a good story. Take the time you need. Best wishes for you and your family!! Bibi
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Title: Good wishes
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 11, 2006 18:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, my 2nd time typing this. I though I had already mentioned it but I dident, very sorry about your oldest and I hope their ok! Sorry I forgot to put this in my last one ^^' XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Title: Im having update withdrawls
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 11, 2006 18:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You left me at a cliffy!!! Now I wanna know what happends next ><
ou made it sound like in this chapter that Inuyasha would just give his pup up to Sesshomaru, when in another chapter thats all he wanted from him. Dont know if that was intended or now but ^^' You really bring in Sesshomarus emoutions this time as well XD *Squee!* I cant wait till you update again!!!! ><
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: May 11, 2006 16:30 PDT
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damn! broken leg? that's gonna chip away at the family funds, ne? ugh... i've broken several bones, i'm surprised my parents kept taking me to the hospital. i have no idea where the money came from! :P great chapter!! it was worth the wait! and i'm glad sess know's how inu's head works now!!! great job on that!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 16:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Silenceoftheheart Update when you can. I would rather you not update since what happen. I hope your child is not in anypain from the break. I hope for a speady recover. By the way i love this latest chapter. Keep upthe good work.
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Reviewed By: SilenceoftheHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 07:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to hear about your oldest. It must be a lot of work caring for a child with a broken leg. Good luck with that. Thank you for the update and don't worry about how long it takes. Your dedicated fans will take quality over quantity anyday. Well, actually we're probably so addicted we'd take either, we prefer the quality anyway. I love the chapter. It's good to see Inuyasha finally getting to explain some things to Sesshoumaru that the jerk really needs to hear. I like how you made Inuyasha feel comfortable enough to actually talk to his brother by making him think that he was talking to a figment of his imagination. There is just so much history and animosity between the brothers I don't think it could have happened any other way. But now that Sesshoumaru knows how much he's really hurt his brother, maybe he can act accordingly and begin creating a working relationship with his mate. Or maybe he'll just throw a hissy because Inuyasha isn't psychic and doesn't know instinctivly how much Sesshoumaru really cares 'cause god forbid Sessy actually tell him. Hence the lovely cliffie at the end of the chapter, now I'll spend weeks trying to disect the mind of a fictional character to determine what he does next. Again, thank you for the update. -Silence-
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Title: yay another chapter!!
Reviewed By: inutaiyoukai25 On: May 11, 2006 05:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fan fic!!!! i dont think i revewed you yet mand for that i am sorry! but your story is so cute poor sessy is all sad and angery!!! i cant wait to find out!!! the suspence is killing me already!! even though this the first day i read the chapter!!!! yay sesy and inu-baby........... insest baby!!!XP
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