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Title: Woahhh.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 10, 2006 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not what I was expecting. To bad none of them now whats' really going on. Heh. Boy, does Inuyasha have problems. And Sesshomaru as well. I hope Sturaki will be able to help. Is Inuyasha pregnant yet? I'm just wondering... Update soon, please. Tryst.
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Title: Im done now
Reviewed By: Passing Reader again Gomen On: April 10, 2006 15:49 PDT
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I give up ;-; sorry for waisting your time...
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Title: Damnitt >:(
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 10, 2006 15:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heres the last part of my bloody review since im to stubbern to let the Godforsaken thing beat me D:< =Dont let it cut off >
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Title: I dident get it all up here and the damn thing says its not up so 1 more time as a just in caser >
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 10, 2006 15:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen, but heres my review again since the review thingys being a dick >:( Cha!!! I think im the 1st to review for this new chapter XD Probibly b/c i've been cheaking this every other day trying to get the damned chapter thing to work *Grumble* So the plot thickends, and it looks like we're in for some Kagome drama >< As always I cant wait for your next chapter! I love how you pulled this one off thou with the comunication by growling ^^ I hope I get to see whats said in the next chapter. I wonder how this whole fainting episode with Inuyasha will affect Sesshomaru's attitude twoards him......hmmm....Guess i'll find out when Inu wakes up eh? Once again beautifly written and forever one of my favorites, you never disapoint! You have a real talent that I just cant help but envie*sp? >
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Title: Are your chapters getting shorter???
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 10, 2006 15:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cha!!! I think im the 1st to review for this new chapter XD Probibly b/c i've been cheaking this every other day trying to get the damned chpter thing to work *Grumble* So the plot thickends, and it looks like we're in for some Kagome drama >< As always I cant wait for your next chapter! I love how you pulled this one off thou with the comunication by growling ^^ I hope I get to see whats said in the next chapter. I wonder how this whole fainting episode with Inuyasha will affect Sesshomaru's attitude twoards him...hmmm...Guess i'll find out when Inu wakes up eh? Once again beautifly written and forever one of my favorites, you never disapoint! You have a real talent that I just cant help but envie*sp?>
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Title: Another Wonderful Chapter ^^
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 08, 2006 20:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, you never disappoint. Another beautiful, wonderus, well written chapter! ^^ I never can wait for you to update, though I wish the darn chapter update thing would work :P I had to struggle with it again ^^' Well worth it though as I liked this chapter, you have a wonderful way of making the story more interesting and giving Inuyasha realalistic emotions such as doubt in his brother. Using the pups he could be carring for that was genious, I cant wait for your next chapter!!!!! XD
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 07:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was nice to have a peek inside of Inuyasha's mind and to know exactly what it is that is causing him so much trouble. Not that we don't know about the control issues, but the speciifics. It was amusing when Inuyasha thought that he might be able to 'pretend' to give in sometimes. That whole section made me envision Sess's expectations, Inu sitting on the floor beside the throne leaning up against Sess's legs like an obediant dog. Ew. Is that what Sess really wants? A fawning pet? That youkai has some serious thinking to do. We had a glimpse into Inuyasha's life that also explains a lot of human behaviors too. Life for his psyche was easier when he was alone with no one to be responsible for. So does he see Sesshoumaru as another burden? Even though it is Sesshoumaru's role to take care of him? It was so sad when he felt that he really needed Kagome's love and acceptance and didn't want to lose her. Sess must really be causing him a lot of anguish in order for him to need her like that at the present moment. I can understand him loving to be with his friends and he might lose all of that. I guess that is weighing heavily on him too. He has come to rely on their acceptance of him. He's not alone anymore, but now he's alone with the enemy, unsure of when he will be turned on. So, I guess it's like a prison where he doesn't know if the guard will be nice to him one day and beat him to death the next. Not very reassuring. The fact that he is insistent on raising Shippou shows just what a responsible person Inuyasha is and how much he really cares for the kit. You did a lot in this chapter in showing us the different sides of Inuyasha. Three sides, hm. Youkai, human and hanyou in the middle. Talk about stress! He needs some serious help. I was just as surprised as he was that Sesshoumaru stayed with him and even more so that Sesshoumaru is purposefully draining his own youki in order to support Inu's. They are both going to be weak and the enemy is headed their way. Dun, dun, dun, dun. I'm anxious to see what will happen next. When will his friends get there? Where is the boogie demon? What will Inuyasha do wakes up? Just how far is Sess willing to go in order to save Inuyasha? Do their own subconscious desires contribute to their youkai's decisions or do the two act completely independent of each other? So many questions. Oh, and when I re-read it, I noticed that Sturaki had told Sesshoumaru something to the effect that it was imperative that he find his mate, that much depended on it. You've really planned this ahead. Great chapter. Anxious to see the next, especially since it seems that Sess is going to be out for awhile. Oh, it was funny that Inu's hanyou was just sitting back and watching the two sides of himself battle each other. It creates a funny picture. Snow
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Reviewed By: Akia Ruquet On: April 07, 2006 02:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. it keeps me wanting to read more, so update soon, k? XD
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Title: The Prophecy
Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 01:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I truely love your story. I wonder how you are going to have Inuyasha settle his little domestic dispute. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: April 07, 2006 00:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your still going strong. I'm glad you finally updated. Hope to see more soon.
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Title: In Other Words #39
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 08:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lots and lots of lovely background! What is the name of Sesshoumaru's healer? Happy to see that she has found a wolf healer to consult and help with and is waiting for the messengers to return; which makes me think of another thing or two. Inuyasha's pack has wound up right outside of Sturaki's dwelling. This has got to be more than just coincidence. I'm wondering if Sturaki is the wolf healer; she has silver eyes similar to some of the wolf demons and long, black hair. Plus her eyes flashed red when she got mad at Sesshoumaru. She has been around way longer than Sesshoumaru. As always, great story! Bibi
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Title: Chap. 38
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 19:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What would only upper class level demons want so badly that they would create a monster from their collective unconsciousness? Lusting for more power or increasing their own power by battle seems like too easy of an answer. Look at the results they got - a creation that takes your life force and spreads your body in little, bitsy pieces around the countryside. This is one scary being!! More clues please!
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Title: Various Things
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 05:55 PDT
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To the person having problems viewing chapters; I always have to refresh in order to see new chapters. Yeah, I know, it's weird.----I just wanted to say how sweet I found the parts of the story where Inuyasha was having to calm Sesshoumaru. At Bokuseno, it was almost heartwrenching how Sesshoumaru was so lost because he had been so long without his mate. His reaction to Inuyasha speaking of a mate was amusing. I loved how Inu described his youki feeling like Sesshoumaru choking him was some 'bizarre form of foreplay'. LOL That was really funny. The whole Inu dream sequence made me want to cry and concern of Sess's youki was sweet. Oh, I loved Sess 'plopping' Inu down in his lap and nuzzling while Inu cuddled up to him. Poor Shippou. It is to laugh. And then Sess dropping Inu on his head and acting like nothing happened!? That was way too funny. The scene with Inu being so dejected while on his way to Sturaki put a lump in my throat. The whole section with the kitsune lord was very amusing. LOL Despite the seriousness of the fic, you manage to inject a lot of humor. Excellent fic. Snow
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Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 18:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this new chapter. Can't wait for the next update!
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Title: Your Chapters appear funny...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 01, 2006 17:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time you update it kinda hard to tell unless I hit the 1st Chapter 1st the procide to the most recent, other wise they dont appear. Really strange, but well worth going threw just to read your beautamis updates :) Cant wait for the next chapter and thankyou for finding time to write even though your busy with glasses, kids, and new computers ^^'
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