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Title: Isirius
Reviewed By: isirius [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 16:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh, yay! Every time I see that you've updated I do my little happy dance. I love this story and I love your writing. And I love that the little editor in my head that turns on when I read stays silent. I hardly ever catch a misspelling or grammatical error. And I'm so glad you have more time to write on this now. Thanks for sharing!
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Title: Thank you!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 14:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU so much for finally updating!!!! I started to think that you'd abandoned this story! Great chapter, as usual. B reading U! L8r!
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Reviewed By: MadMaxxCoyote On: April 08, 2008 14:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Interesting, I'm not sure how I feel about Inuyasha being so submissive, but it is an interesting story, I'm enjoying myself. Though I can't help but think that maybe he got pregnant a little quick. I know one time is all it takes, but still.
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 20:58 PST
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This story has taken me some two days of not doing much else to read and it think its still probably nowhere near completion! That just boggles my mind! I wish I had come across it when it was complete because now I'll have to do what the others have been doing. Wait. XD I await updates impatiently but I understand the thought of three children, all babies. Ahaha, best of luck and I hope you're getting the support you need. Hopefully you're able to take a small amount of time to yourself, even if its just an hour. See you in the next chapter whenever that is! -FG
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 20:30 PST
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Wha??? YAY!!! Finally! A story where Inuyasha is the one to take care of Shippo!
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 19:47 PST
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You make me dislike Kagome even more. XD I had no idea you were a mom! How interesting! I dont suppose your kids know what you write? Hm, I wonder how old they are...anyway, I'm still reading and still GREATLY enjoying this amazing fic! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 00:19 PST
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I've always liked the idea of Inuyasha sort of adopting Shippo rather than leaving him behind with Kagome. I'm not a real fan of her, I used to be, but her insistent 'sits' really graved my nerves. Anyway, cant wait for this Shippo/Inuyasha interaction. I think Shippo would probably choose Kagome if given the choice, but in my opinion he'd really be better off with Inuyasha. Loved this chatper because it was so cute! I hope Shippo will be alright. I wonder who found him...
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:01 PST
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Well...that was...weird. I never thought Sesshomaru would be the type to engage in the bottle. But, I suppose he was all emotional over what he felt about his brother. Happens to the best of men I suppose. It made him OOC times a million, but I think everyone knows that. And, he was drunk, so thats his excuse, and yours. I hope he returns back to normal soon enough! :P -FG
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 18:48 PST
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Awwww Sesshomaru is drawn to his cute little brother. XD I thought he was supposed to be the smarter one of the two? Ahaha. I really do like your writing style. Its well written, with just the right amount of detail. Your characterizations are on the mark too! Bravo! Only one real complaint, and thats that your chapters are so damn short! :P -FG
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 18:42 PST
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Hm, if Sess's...aura or whatever is supposed to cry out to his mate upon seeing him, how come he hasnt realized Inuyasha was his mate before? Was it because this need of theirs ONLY occurs during mating season? And why on earth am I asking questions when you already have 14 written chapters? XD In any case, I agree that Inuyasha is smart. He'd have to be being a half blood and everything. He'd need the street smarts to survive as long as he did without much parental figures. I'm glad someone else agrees as well! -FG
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 18:06 PST
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Nice beginning! Not too over the top ridiculous with the idea of the witch, and very amusing that Sess has yet to find his "demoness". XD
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Reviewed By: Acacia_Jules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 16:34 PST
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(My review was regarding Chapter 9, when Sesshoumaru was remembering the night InuYasha was born, and their father died. I just realized these reviews forms don't say what chapter you're reviewing)
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Reviewed By: Acacia_Jules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write an AU, of this fic, about what would have happened had Sesshoumaru actually listened to his senses that night, and gone where they were telling him to. What would have changed, had he been there to help, and grown up with Inu, possibly even realizing exactly what InuYasha was before this point.
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Reviewed By: night rose fox On: January 08, 2008 07:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, hope that your Christmas was a good one, and that your kids are doing well. I look forward to seeing more added to your stories, when you get the chance of course. Until then best of wishes for this new year, and the future to come. Ja-ne! ~~Aki
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Title: hi :~) (^_^)
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 19:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey ok it took like three days to read everything that you had written (ur other stories) and I wanted to tell you how much I love them. hoping for some updates congrat on the new baby boy and his first christmas and new years. ok I hate kagome I very rare that I read her and inu together and even then the authors are awesome. so I love you cause I love INU& ESS fics and man I would have kill kagome a long time ago. who I so want to thank you for the ending she says that she love inuyasha but she treats him like a slave dog. I don't the ones I love to the ground by yelling sit if I couldn't get my way. she is so immature I wouldn't want her either and she tried to force her view on other and don't seem to realize that she is not in her world anymore and get with the era. baka! and sango it seem like she doesn't care about inuyasha either like she's here to protect kagome for inuyasha. they are all ungreatful inuyasha does everything for them. hunt the real fighting, tracking and he doesn't sleep cause he watchin out for everyone else protecting them. some friends they are letting a child hurt him. it that away to treat someone? NO! they are all trying to change inuyasha and they think that since inu was with kikyou on some level he should be with kagome. bet she didn't think as far as what could happen after their mission what if the jewel make kagome go back to her time. she doesn't belong there and inuyasha doesn't belong in her time yet. for someone who doesn't judge she does it alot. um ok so now that I have my ranting out of the way (i wouldn't mine if she die by the way. she's in sesshy house and on his lands she need to learn some manners and respect) inuyasha lived 200 years without her i'm sure he can do the rest without her too. Sesshomaru hope he's gettting with the program although he needs more gulity. it's like it didn't occur to him tht inuyasha not the way he like is because he was never really train and he abaondon him so of course he's different from you BAKA!. sesshy should be glad that I hate kagome or else I wouldn't have voted for him to win inuyasha's heart. be funny if inuyasha turn out to be the dominate the female like figure should always rule were smarter. keh lolXD :~) any way i have more praise to give but my hands hurt so in short I love this fic and your other and when in is pup I vote boy or more than one is in there. I love your other fics as well have a good one and happy new years and safe and well wishes to ur family. shivonne aka ladytokyo (*_*)
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