| "To Measure My Capacity" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
Reviewed By: demon_wind_shuriken_no_jitsu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!! i love it!! i want more! this has got to be one of the more interesting ff's i've read in a while. definately on my favorites list. update soon!
|
Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story, the way you have Naruto portrayed is great, and you leave many questions to be answered. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
|
Reviewed By: Renegade Assassin On: April 18, 2006 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your story is great. I like the way you led everything out. It shows that you are thinking carefully about what you write. Naruto's personality change good mix of himself and Itachi. The fact that you made the Kyuubi a female was unexpected, but not in the lest a bad twist. You have the potential to be a great writer. I hope you continue your story, for only you can keep it on the track that it is going. I'll be looking forward to your next update. Good luck.
|
Reviewed By: LiahChan On: April 18, 2006 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude i love this
|
Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. I look forward to reading more soon, and especially how Sasuke reacts to Naruto's overwhelming power and killing prowess, since Sasuke is normally so arrogant and proud of his power in the anime/manga. I like how you've altered the storyline so far, and the changes you've made have been interesting. As long as you don't give Naruto the cursed seal(hate it when that happens >.>), I'll be happy^^ Hope to read more soon~
|
Reviewed By: Auroawinter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. Cant wait to read more. I really liked how you show Naruto's development and cant wait to see how the interactions play once he is on the team ^_^ keep up the great work Chrys
|
Reviewed By: neosildrake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 09:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really good stuff. Not too much drama and angst, like many other ffs have and easy to read. Itachi is actually portrayed as someone human, who has feelings, even if his priorities lie elsewhere. I also like the "powerfull, but holding back to have one up the sleeve" Naruto. Untill now it's areally good story. I don't know about the M/F right now. As far as I see he's 12. Maybe you should wait for a little before you go on an all-out romance? Friendship - yes, romance - please wait untill they have at least hit puberty properly (age 14 minimun, I would say). I always think writers overdo it making the pairings too young. Ask yourself: What about yourself at age 12? ... I probably had a crush on a fictional character... they are soo much better ... Icha Icha waits! *LOL* Anyway, keep this up!
|
Reviewed By: soloeli On: January 06, 2006 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This fic is great! I had such fun reading it! Very interesting and attention keeping. I would like to read more of it. Keep up the good work!
|
Title: nice
Reviewed By: Edward_Elric [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story, really original to keep it up!
|
Reviewed By: kpkchq [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good!! i was just wondering, there is romance? who r the couples >:) heh
|
Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic. I really like it. Its very unique.
|
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
