| "My Slave for All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2011 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work and i've read this one over a few times and it's completely amazing! Some of the best i've ever read. There's one thing that bothers me about the story a little bit though. The pharaoh's reasoning for not outlawing slavery is he cannot guarantee everyone would follow those laws. If that were the case, then why would there be any laws ever? Perhaps you can clarify this bit for me? |
Reviewed By: animefairy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2010 13:28 EDT
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hey its 2010 and you still havent wrote another chapter. its been a year. plz write the last two chapters!
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Title: hoping you well
Reviewed By: MeefMonster and Kix On: October 01, 2009 12:33 EDT
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it's been many months since your last update. but we thought we'd read your story again to remind our selves of what it was about, we miss you and hope you return to writing soon. hugs and lots and lots of chocolate!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 03:44 EST
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Great chapter. I hope Yami will admit his feelings when they meet on the bridge. Poor Yugi, Atemu and Yuugi are depending on this.
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Reviewed By: WarenRose On: January 29, 2009 15:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
take your time writing..this story is worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 14:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great to finally have a chapter! Neat Work! Later.
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Title: DUCK!!!
Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 22:28 EST
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Glad you've started to update this again, I enjoyed this chapter' oh and DUCK!!! (flying christmas tree comes your way) hey it's 26 th jan and no update... and you said we could throw one if you hadn't updated by the 5th...[grin]
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper (too lazy to login) On: December 31, 2008 01:11 EST
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Wow, it's been really long. But at least you're trying to finish the story. The new development with Bakura is interesting, albeit slightly confusing. Keep on writing, ok?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2008 08:46 EST
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Good chapter. Poor Yugi. I hope that the fact that yami sent a gift means he is starting to come around a little. I do hope he will be intime. Bakura is a god?
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Reviewed By: HeavensChaos On: January 29, 2008 19:47 EST
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Nice chapter, great to see the update. I have a dA account, and their strict on stolen art. If you want, and I'm assuming you don't have an account there, you didn't make it seem like you did, I can report it. Just have to go to the picture and report a violation. Or send a help desk request. It'll get taken down and they'll be banned for stealing the art. I've seen it happen. If you want me to I can, or at least add to the support that it is your picture. Whatever helps. I was glad to see another chapter. When you get the next one I'll be even happier, hope things go better.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 20:11 EST
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Someone really stole your art? That's just not right, I'm sorry... but it's nice to hear from you again, and see a new chapter. I hope you'll find a way to deal w/ the art issue, cya.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 15:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sorry about your art. That sucks. But your chapter doesn't. Hey I thought that this thing would never be continue. Glad I was wrong. Now update again,soon,please. C ya
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Reviewed By: tenshi_no_kozou On: January 28, 2008 06:41 EST
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OMFGROFLMAOYAYZ!!!!!!! You finally updated! *hearts* ^__________________________________________^
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix-NSI On: January 28, 2008 05:34 EST
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Hey, long time no post. THANK YOU! Still really enjoying this story. I'm sorry to hear about your artwork. It's always awful when someone steals something from you. I have no idea what to do about that other than contact deviantart and let them know this person is passing off your work as theirs.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 03:45 EST
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heay luv..sorry about the pic stuff..may the person who comitted this cribe burn in the pit of dispare while being surounded by pink bunny rabbits singing 'Happy happy joy joy" over and over again.. thanks for the update..hope to read more soon..
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