| "My Slave for All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: kirbyhavard On: May 17, 2006 16:53 EDT
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this is really good please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: May 16, 2006 16:07 EDT
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please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far, and I wish you luck on your finals!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 10:22 EDT
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I hope Yugi can do something about that asp! I thought maybe the Pharaoh would pass out on top of Yugi, but his way is so much better. Too bad Yugi is still denying his feelings. Good chapter. Good luck with your exams!
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Title: *thumbs up*
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was quick thinking for Yugi's part; The Pharaoh would probably try to kill himself if he realized what he had done if he didn't. Good luck on your finals!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 01:37 EDT
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This was fun. Good luck on your finals. I just finished mine, thank goodness.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 01:35 EDT
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Nicely written, well plotted. I hope to read more of this soon.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 02:00 EDT
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I see Malik's little stunt was a little of both. I was wondering if she was supposed to be Rebecca. Atemu should have talked to Yugi before getting drunk, I hope no one gets hurt. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this new chapter am Im glad you updated!! Thanks for telling when the next update will be, most of the authors don't do that. Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 03:40 EDT
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So Malik was the one to try to kidnap Yugi. I wonder did he do it to help Yugi or to hurt the Pharaoh? Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: BabygrilKagome1015 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good now I could not belive the Pharoh did that to Malik (my boy)but very well done.cant wait tell ya finish.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Dang...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 01:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Poor Malik. I guess the Pharaoh didn't know that no means no. He lost two good friends and the loyalty and respect of someone close to him. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: bunny453 On: March 24, 2006 23:21 EST
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: If I only had a friend
Reviewed By: sexliesvideotapes On: February 10, 2006 23:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was quite excited that you had updated this story...I was afraid it was back shelved and would never had an ending...It has been a month now and I hope that you will update this wonderfully written story....arigatou for a great story...
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