| "My Slave for All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: BabygrilKagome1015 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good now I could not belive the Pharoh did that to Malik (my boy)but very well done.cant wait tell ya finish.
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Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Dang...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 01:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Malik. I guess the Pharaoh didn't know that no means no. He lost two good friends and the loyalty and respect of someone close to him. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: bunny453 On: March 24, 2006 23:21 EST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: If I only had a friend
Reviewed By: sexliesvideotapes On: February 10, 2006 23:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was quite excited that you had updated this story...I was afraid it was back shelved and would never had an ending...It has been a month now and I hope that you will update this wonderfully written story....arigatou for a great story...
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Reviewed By: bunny453 On: February 05, 2006 19:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Damn That Seto...Poor Yugi
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 14:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrr...damn that Seto...o dear, I wonder what would become of the pair now? Please update soon! ^.^
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Title: Awesomid!! >
Reviewed By: Kyo_Slave On: January 10, 2006 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I really hope that you write more....and hopefully later on the Yugi will trust the pharoa(cant psell) enough to sleep lol...please update soon!!!!
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Title: this is great!!
Reviewed By: Broken_Angel_Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 13:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! I really love this story so far! your doing great and I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 02:34 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. I think that Yugi is very brave but he still needs to think before he acts. Atem is showing his trust in Yugi he's allowing m=him to see his weaknesses. Great story. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Jo On: December 27, 2005 21:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is so cute I hope you up date moe and soon. I hope yugi's life is now hopeful. I also hope in your story that Yami and Yugi becomes friends or more it up to you how this story is made. I just hope you up date and soon.
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: Jean is Jhoney On: December 27, 2005 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL XD I can't believe Yugi's slave name was "Rooster" This is a pretty cute story. Update soon yes?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 03:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At least they will all be reborn again. You left Yugi with basically no friends to help him, but he is a strong person and I know he will win over the king. This is really wonderful. Happy Holidays.
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Reviewed By: redconvoy1 On: December 24, 2005 21:58 EST
Comment/Review:
You did NOT just say you got a writer's block on Awakenings! I was enjoying that, but I like this even better. You better write more soon!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 08:20 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this so far, I hope you get your interst in Awakening back, after you finish this. It is really good. Don't let bad reviewers get you down. I like the way Jounouchi is still protecting Yugi or did protect him in the past. Update soon,please.
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