| "My Slave for All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: November 21, 2006 21:17 EST
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DECEMBER 14!!!!AHHHH...Damn schools and finals and holidays and turkey and stuffing, but not yams...yams are our friend...yummmy...*drools*...so love this story...glad to see an update...missed you and your fantastic writing...cannot wait for 12/14...marking off the days as of now....laughs...catt
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Reviewed By: Aislynn G. (bein' lazy) On: November 21, 2006 13:45 EST
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Good luck on your finals! I enjoyed this chapter (and the whole story - really!) and thought Yugi playing checkers with his sub-consious was cute. Of course his heart is so wrapped up in Atemu that his sub-consious would take that form! :)
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Title: Attention! Attention! Heh...
Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 13:31 EST
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^.^ I feel the need to make an announcement, yup. There will be no character bashing in this fanfic. You just have to wait and see how this relationship between Yami and Tea works out. Charcter bashing just sucks the goodness out of a fanfic, y'know. So just wanted to make that known so EternalDragon and other readers are worried about that. =)
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 13:27 EST
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Good chapter. Yami is in a state of denial. Happy Thanksgiving and Good luck with your finals.
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Reviewed By: EternalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 13:25 EST
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Please, please, please don't bash Tea. I hate Tea Bashing. I'm loving your fic right now, and I've been keeping up with it since chpt 1. Keep it up.
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Title: TBFTD!
Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: November 14, 2006 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TBFTD! (Thank buddha for turkey day!) I understand I'm going down south myself over the break to see some of my folks. I hope that you have an excellent break! And thank you for giving us a date to look for an update, that was very kind of you.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Jh4e aka Jhoney On: November 11, 2006 20:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Listen loving the story. Yes, this should be an interesting twist to see how these two get back together...if that's what's in the stars for them. n_n and you're forgiven for having let this story go for a while. ^~* When you're busy with life, it's understandable a few things slip through the cracks.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 16:31 EST
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I liked the chapter. Poor Yugi Yami doesn't know who he is. I hope he gets his memories back soon, too. It's not fiar that only Yugi remembers.
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Title: o_o
Reviewed By: furubafmanarutohngfan(not logged in) On: November 10, 2006 15:15 EST
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you gotta continue this is an awsome story i
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Reviewed By: Daisuke14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 19:36 EST
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for a vote, i vote for "Wishes" as your next one. hope to see you soon!
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Reviewed By: Silverwolfe On: October 26, 2006 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heey!!! I like the story!!! Keep going! I'm voting on the first story idea....I like that one, so go ahead!! lol
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Reviewed By: amayarain On: October 25, 2006 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea better of when atemu is a servant of seto, and finds yugi. it seems so out of place when suddenly a geniue appears... the plot of a weak boy being enslaved is fitting from the previous story.
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Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: October 22, 2006 09:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congradulations, you can now legaly drink! Oh and my birthday was on the 16th as well. Anyways, thank for this story and for continuing to update it.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 15:25 EDT
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i like the idea of nuber 2 better. and not just becaus i like ancient rome either! whooo hoo,, write on!
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 11:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was most excellent! I cant wait for the next update! Oh, and happy birthday ^_^ My little brother's birthday was only two days after yours. Anyway, I can't wait for the next update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 07:44 EDT
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Good chapter. Congratulations on your 21st. This is really great. NOW Seto is the Pharaoh and will be good pharaoh, I hope. Can't wait to see the reunion of the two.
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad that you're back to update this story! ^_^ I really love the last few chapters and can't wait until the rest of it. You're a great writer. Well, i think that both of the new fic ideas you said to vote on sounded interesting. Anyway, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: yamimylove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story so far! =D anyway i think guarded could be intersting, so i vote for that one soo about your story, is so sad they all dies =( but they will reborn yay! lol so anyway love ur story keep it up! and update soon byee!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 01:12 EDT
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Good chapter. I like #1 the best. Seto will be Pharaoh now. I hope the baby will be safe. He probably will rape and kill Yuugi since he killed the pharaoh and his mother.
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 21:12 EDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! LUV THE NEW CHAPTERS!!!
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Reviewed By: Silverwolfe On: August 13, 2006 21:10 EDT
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PLEAAASSSEEE UPDATE SOON!!! IM DYING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 12:21 EDT
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this is pretty good so far but the cliff hangers... oh well please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 19:04 EDT
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wow, I was really shocked when I first read this but it's OK. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 13:44 EDT
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I'm sorry that your dad's in the hospital. I hope it's nothing too serious. But if it is, I hope that he get's better. Anyway, nice chapter, the lemon ended great, and Marik's evil plan is... well, evil. I'll wait patiently for the next part. Cya.
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Reviewed By: yamimylove(to lazy to log in) On: July 04, 2006 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww.. poor you, i hope ur dad gets well soon! i'm sure he will! i'll pray for him, regarding ur story, is awesome, loved the lemon, lol loved the part that the bed collapsed lol i'll wait for ur next update don't hurry, till u feel better to type kay? love ya!! YmL =D
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: July 03, 2006 17:10 EDT
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love the newest chapters!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 16:40 EDT
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Poor baby, I hope Marik doesn't find her. Good chapter. i was hoping he wouldn't get an heir I hope he doesn't find Yugi. Good chapter.
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Title: *pout*
Reviewed By: Omichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU need to update more often. *sigh* I sit here waiting for the e-mail on the day you say you plan to update and it never comes. I was like jumping for joy when the e-mail came!
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Reviewed By: ROAR Again =D On: June 30, 2006 22:28 EDT
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-looks at the calendar- ;__; today is the day... i see no update. ;___;
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kawaii!!!!! oh i just cant wait to read more!! this fic is so good!! update again soon!!
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