| "My Slave for All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silverwolfe On: October 26, 2006 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heey!!! I like the story!!! Keep going! I'm voting on the first story idea....I like that one, so go ahead!! lol
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Reviewed By: amayarain On: October 25, 2006 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea better of when atemu is a servant of seto, and finds yugi. it seems so out of place when suddenly a geniue appears... the plot of a weak boy being enslaved is fitting from the previous story.
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Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: October 22, 2006 09:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congradulations, you can now legaly drink! Oh and my birthday was on the 16th as well. Anyways, thank for this story and for continuing to update it.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 15:25 EDT
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i like the idea of nuber 2 better. and not just becaus i like ancient rome either! whooo hoo,, write on!
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 11:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was most excellent! I cant wait for the next update! Oh, and happy birthday ^_^ My little brother's birthday was only two days after yours. Anyway, I can't wait for the next update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 07:44 EDT
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Good chapter. Congratulations on your 21st. This is really great. NOW Seto is the Pharaoh and will be good pharaoh, I hope. Can't wait to see the reunion of the two.
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad that you're back to update this story! ^_^ I really love the last few chapters and can't wait until the rest of it. You're a great writer. Well, i think that both of the new fic ideas you said to vote on sounded interesting. Anyway, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: yamimylove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story so far! =D anyway i think guarded could be intersting, so i vote for that one soo about your story, is so sad they all dies =( but they will reborn yay! lol so anyway love ur story keep it up! and update soon byee!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 01:12 EDT
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Good chapter. I like #1 the best. Seto will be Pharaoh now. I hope the baby will be safe. He probably will rape and kill Yuugi since he killed the pharaoh and his mother.
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 21:12 EDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! LUV THE NEW CHAPTERS!!!
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Reviewed By: Silverwolfe On: August 13, 2006 21:10 EDT
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PLEAAASSSEEE UPDATE SOON!!! IM DYING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 12:21 EDT
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this is pretty good so far but the cliff hangers... oh well please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 19:04 EDT
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wow, I was really shocked when I first read this but it's OK. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 13:44 EDT
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I'm sorry that your dad's in the hospital. I hope it's nothing too serious. But if it is, I hope that he get's better. Anyway, nice chapter, the lemon ended great, and Marik's evil plan is... well, evil. I'll wait patiently for the next part. Cya.
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Reviewed By: yamimylove(to lazy to log in) On: July 04, 2006 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww.. poor you, i hope ur dad gets well soon! i'm sure he will! i'll pray for him, regarding ur story, is awesome, loved the lemon, lol loved the part that the bed collapsed lol i'll wait for ur next update don't hurry, till u feel better to type kay? love ya!! YmL =D
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