| "Only Heartbroken" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Title: SORRY!
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay guys i'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooo sorry! i tried to put the 4th chapter on but it only put like half of it!!! how do i fix it?! PLEASE TELL ME!! AGGGGGHHHHH!don't kill me! don't kill me, help me! I'M SOO SORRY! please forgive me!!!
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Title: get going
Reviewed By: DarkAngle Shaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 23:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I MEAN REALY GET GOING! I WANNA READ MORE AND SOME LEMONS PLZ KEEP GOING!
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Title: Daddy-O
Reviewed By: Daddy-O On: January 23, 2006 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I am extremely impressed!!! You have a unique writing style that rivals published authors. It appears I have slightly underestimated your ability to transfer thoughts to paper....or keyboards. You should actually write the stories for the cartoons and show those no talent hacks how a real author tells a story. Keep up the good work!!I'm very proud of you. I love you. :)
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: DarkAngle Shaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP ON WRIGHTING FOR GOD SAKES IM GOING CRAZY HERE *whimpers* PLEASE KEEP ON WRIGHTING!! and just mabe a little longer...
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Reviewed By: Inu_FMA_luvr On: January 18, 2006 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! I can't wait for you te review. I have a fanfic called UNDER THE COVER OF DARKNESS at animespiral.com. Please read it. if you do I'll review more.
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: inuyasha luvs kagome 4eva long On: January 13, 2006 05:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! U r keeping me in so muchie suspense... U have got a thingy in u that makes u write so well huh... I am juz too lousy in writing.. unlike u!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: inuyasha luvs kagome 4eva long On: January 13, 2006 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! U r keeping me in so muchie suspense... U have got a thingy in u that makes u write so well huh... I am juz too lousy in writing.. unlike u!
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Title: YOUR SO FRIGEN AWSOME
Reviewed By: DarkAngle shaelyn On: January 11, 2006 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOODNESS YOU ARE SOO AWSOME please keep on wrighting i love it!! you are great this is the frist time doeing a review but i realy like it. can you maby add some lemons ~.^ n e ways plz keep on going for the sake of all fans from DarkAngel (a.k.a. Shaelyn.B)
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Title: Konnichiwa!!!
Reviewed By: Manoko/Osaka On: January 10, 2006 20:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey Chiyo-Chan I read your fanfic so far and it is so good I mean, relly I can't wait for the next chapter!!!I mean this is like REALLY GOOD!!See you at school!!!Osaka
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Reviewed By: Neta On: January 10, 2006 05:00 CST
Comment/Review:
so cute!!!! and i like yhe way this story is going...looking for the rest of it Neta
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Reviewed By: delanie On: January 09, 2006 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative in details and actions happening. Definately a future novelist here!! I enjoyed how each chapter ends having you wanting more!!
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: ShaylaBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon plz. i wonder wuts gonna happen if kouga finds out where she is???
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Title: Only Heartborken
Reviewed By: crazy144 On: January 02, 2006 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehheheh i like this story iam so glad kagome dumped kogas sry ass thats wat he gets lmao
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Reviewed By: lilxlulu On: January 01, 2006 18:55 CST
Comment/Review:
hey...your story is good....but one question...isn;t this suppose to be one-shot?....
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Title: it's just me
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i'm srry if my story sux cuz u see i was just in a hurry! i'm new to mediaminer so don't get mad at me!! i will start rereading my story's chapters so that it is better and the readers can understand it more. any way i am also srry because at first i did not allow non-members review and that was my mistake. i fixed it to where everyone can review if they choose to do so. thank u for reading my story and i will add when ever i get the chance to! ^_^ -inukagpuppylove(the author of this story)
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