| "The Sleepover!" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: nice... On: February 18, 2006 01:27 CST
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its okay... but its really short... please write longer chapters and fics so many will review u! Anyway, i really like it.. keep up the good job!
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Title: i love it!
Reviewed By: Sasuke lover On: February 18, 2006 01:23 CST
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it's really good!! please write more fics! i'm a sasusaku lover!!!
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Title: The Sleepover
Reviewed By: abzsmile On: January 29, 2006 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one it was really exciting so if you could help me....can you........................................................................ ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........Please!please!PLEASE! continue the story already, it was GREAT! don't worry I'm not lying it was really GOOD!
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Reviewed By: Aznkizz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww that is the cutest story ever! well one of the cutest. its hard for me to determine the best ones cause i love lots of stuff at the same time. im a major sasusaku fan so in this fanfic community thats pretty much all i read! ^-^ XD im majorly happy about the outcome of this story
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Reviewed By: kawaii_baka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one... kaya lng... y is der to many kissing scene??? hehehe. ikaw ha.... ndi ka man lng naawa kay shikamaru... pero k lng... dats ur own story eh.... it is very good....
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Reviewed By: qt_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 10:12 CST
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moshi-moshi minna-san!it's me again! arigatou for the reviews! i really appretiate it! gomen for me not yet updating, school work.... but i'll really try to update as soon as possible! i have already written it in a piece of paper and i'm working on typing it.Oh, and bananagurl, i'll try working on your suggestion, but i think it'll take a while.... So again, arigatou everyone!!!
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Reviewed By: qt_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 05:04 CST
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arugatou minna-san for the reviews that you have given me. i appretiate it!
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Title: the sleepover
Reviewed By: =) On: January 05, 2006 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is really funny and cute!!!! please please continue it soon!!!! I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. ^__^ =)~mine
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Title: the sleepover
Reviewed By: =) On: January 05, 2006 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is really funny and cute!!!! please please continue it soon!!!! I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. ^__^ =)
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Reviewed By: uchihagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Its funny! pls tell what happens next pretty pls. and my friend is also reading your fanfic. she wants me to tell you that she loves your fanfic(she doesn't know how to make a review) i look forward for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: cathlene On: January 03, 2006 21:32 CST
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it's very very cool!(note:eloisa only forced me to give her a review and guess what ...i haven't even read her story!!!!!!!!
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Title: that's good!!!
Reviewed By: radhika_best [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
u can put jealousy scenes too. like make someone else dare someone else to kiss sakura ( that also in front of sasuke) and it makes sasuke jealous. he! he! he! that was a lame suggestion , eloisa. well.....update this fic as well as the new student 'cause i'm much more eager on reading that fic.
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Reviewed By: qt_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:13 CST
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hi guys! Hope you enjoyed my fic. Please review if you have read this. I want to hear ur comments, suggestions and everything. Well that's it! Hope you enjoyed it! Ja! ;p
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Title: The Sleepover
Reviewed By: ranalover515@yahoo.com On: December 29, 2005 23:48 CST
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Soooooooooooooooooooo great! PLEASE write more! Please Please I want to see what happens when sasuke-kun sleeps with sakura-chan later ooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn!!!! OH! Next make Shino dare sasuke and sakura KISS(and I'm not talking about any kiss,I mean with their tounges together!!!)and you could either make them do the kiss in front of everybody or make them do it in the closet!!!! PLEASE I'm DYING TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! THANK YOU!!
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your idea ... but if you made it into a story with sentence structure, there would probably a lot more words. And a lot more words = longer chapters = more people reading = more visits = popular. In my eyes, anyways. Keep up the good work! ~Banana Gurl
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