Reviewed By: Goodie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 19:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great fanfic, I love you're storyline and plot. Keep writing, and don't give up. I only have one suggestion for you and that would be to get a beta of some sort, or maybe have someone read over your stories before you post them, because they are full of grammatical and spelling mistakes, and improving them would only make your story and chapters that much better. You're very good at writing and don't give up, and if you ever need and help I can always help you in anyway! Keep writing! Goodie A.K.A. Ravenlight or Brittany
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