| "The Tough Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: ram [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2002 19:20 CST
Comment/Review:
whan's the next part? |
Reviewed By: fire97 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2002 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fanfick extremely interisting and I cant wait for the next instalation |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2002 09:31 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU STOPED I WANT MORE...and is there going to be a lemon between goku and ryoko?
ok this lil hentai chick is waiting for more,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2002 09:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I...need...MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz ,oh great angelryodo, this unwothy fan wishes to read more. plz put up more.
plz put up more ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: sam On: March 11, 2002 16:03 CST
Comment/Review:
i love it |
Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2002 11:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey people i am willing to take suggestions on my story from you just e mail me and tell me what you think should happen next.If it sounds good i'll put that in my story.If you think something is wrong e-mail me and tell me i will fix it right away.If you dont understand a part in this fic would you please be kind enough to notify me and tell me exactly what is wrong and i will fix it right away. |
Reviewed By: kitty On: March 10, 2002 20:53 CST
Comment/Review:
wrie more now its geting evening better |
Reviewed By: Dark Saiyan Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2002 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. its good, but its really hard to read! use puncuation!! You have a really great idea, though. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: April 24, 2002 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Ryoko and Goku are a very perfect couple!!!! So is Tenchi and Aeka!!!!! DBZ and Tenchi Muyo are my two all time favorites!!!! Please keep writing, I'd love to read more!!!!!! HUUUUUURRRAAHHHH FOR GOKU AND RYOKO!!! AND YAAAAAAAAYYY FOR TENCHI AND AEKA!!!!!! Hey why don't they both have a double wedding!!!!! It would be so cool!!!! *Laughs happily, while spininig round and round* Can bearly wait for more!!!! You are now my most favorite AUTHOR!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: vinny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good and interesting story
do not bother with commas |
Reviewed By: kawaiiminor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2002 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
dear lord!!! please put in some commas!!!
see these--> , ' " and .!!! usse them!!! |
Reviewed By: kitty On: February 25, 2002 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
write more is geting good |
Reviewed By: Midnight Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2002 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story write some more good idea never read this pairing before. |
Reviewed By: kitty On: February 17, 2002 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
more more more |
Reviewed By: sam On: March 10, 2002 16:25 CST
Comment/Review:
keep them togather |
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