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| "Demon Slayer Sango" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: kawii-hime On: March 08, 2007 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written. I think I loved the plot the most...being the critical reader that I am...I found a few flaws but nothing dramtic(FYI the flaws were there only because I so wanted the story to go my way) VERY GOOD though...you should be awfully proud of yourself.:) So committed and all...I can never do that. I wish I can give you more critique but it's just so good. I LOVE THE PAIRING SO MUCH! I AM UTTERLY IN LOVE WITH THEM. THEY MAKE ME HAPPY AND THEY ARE SO GOOD TOGETHER. SANGO IS MUCH TOO 'CLEAN' FOR MIROKU. I LUV U TOO:) FOR HAVING SUCH A GREAT TALENT TO WRITE SOMETHING SO AWESOME. ******U MOST DEF. SHOULD WRITE MORE!!! ***MORE*** GREAT JOB!!! kawii!
| Reviewed By: KakashiRulez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 02:01 CDT
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wow such a good fic... answering "rukia-sama and the pussy cats"question of where else can sango/sess fics can be found... there are like HUNDREDS on a site made by trollmia the link is: http://www.trollmia.se/ and after u go there click on fanfictions
| Reviewed By: Leeloo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 11:03 CDT
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Overall, this was a fun story to read. It was interesting to find a Sessh/Sango pairing, even more fun to see that you actually made it seem plausible. It was a really good fic that I enjoyed reading, and a good length too- 30 chapters is long enough for me to take a few days to read, but short enough for me not to lost interest after say, the sixtieth chapter. :P I hope to see many more things from you!
| Reviewed By: Lizzzz On: May 04, 2006 17:11 CDT
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Congratulations! You have successfully written a pairing I thought would never work. I thoroughly enjoyed your story, from beginning to end (minus the Inu/Kag fluff) Your battle scenes were interesting. I liked the pace you set for the story. Not too fast, because then things aren't explained, but you didn't go into novel-like and headache-inducing detail which is sometimes just too much for a fanfiction. I personally look for an enjoying read that keeps me moving along and interested in what's going on. You developed the characters wonderfully I have to say, especially since no author I've ever read has ever gone into such detail with Sango's character (I know, you knida had to, being she was a main character, but still props to you) I enjoyed your take on Rin's character also. So many portray her as this bright and cheerful little girl, who we all love, but who seems to have no other thoughts in her head other than picking flowers and hugging her Sess-sama. I liked how your Rin had thoughts, perceptions. She picked up on things, undercurrents, the way many children do. Your grammar and spelling were good. You could use a beta though, if you don't have one already, just to help you pic up on the little grammatical errors that don't hurt the story but will help improve the overall flavor of your writing. And I just have to say, Inuyasha was amazing in this story. You hit his character dead-on. With almost no alterations yet he still meshed with your story. I love that. Miroku, in my opinion, was so-so, but then again I don't read many fanfictions where his character is explored, so I can't comment but so much. The passion between Sesshomaru and Sango was riveting, and not just the sex scenes. I highly appreciated the fact that this Sesshomaru had a brain even in the face of his lust, which many other Sess's don't seem to maintain. Thankfully, oh so thankfully, he didn't just drop into his bloodlust and rut and walk away (not that I actually minnnd those types of stories, *lecherous grin*) You brought into account in your story his responsibilities, all the hardships he must face in his day-to-day life, and it was very enlightening for me. His character was amazing. The idea that he just needed to open up a little, explore the feelings that he -does- have, because he isn't some lust-controlled, completely cold supernatural being...it was nice to see. You said at the beginnign of one of your chapters that you hoped to write him well-balanced, and found yourself trying not to attribute human traits to him. Well, I think you did a fantastic job. The imagery in some scenes was amazing. I think if you continue to write and challenge yourself you could make great strides in your writing. And umm..wow this is a long review. Anyway, I hope to see more stories from you. I've lost my train of thought, and can't think of naything else to say except congrats to you for a story well written. ~Liz, your neighborhood honest reviewer
| Title: Demon Slayer Sango
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 14:22 CDT
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Well, well, your first fic? You did an excellent job, the plot was well woven and the conversations flowed smoothly. Your charactorization of Sess caught me by suprise a couple of times, but in a very good way. I really tend to favor Sess/Sango pairings, they are both such strong figures, noble, honorable, atitudeal in the extreme in they're own ways. I enjoyed the story, I would have enjoyed the talk between Sess and Inu, but that it didn't happen didn't detract from the story at all. I'm just anal that way. Again, Good Job, Very Good Job.
| Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a wonderful story you have written. i love the pairing of sango and sess for the same reasons you do. she is a strong, independant, passionate woman and makes a perfect partner for sesshomaru. both are formidable and beautiful. they are very deserving of one another. even if you did go a bit ooc regarding sess, so what. this fic was a very enjoyable read and flowed seemlessly. writing 'good' fanfiction isn't easy, but you are great at it. i thank you so much for sharing this fic and hope to see more from you. take care.
| Reviewed By: kitsunesan (not singed in) On: March 25, 2006 01:14 CST
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HA! i read all of it in one day! ...reallly is that it? i loved this pareing...pouts
| Title: Its....over?
Reviewed By: DarkRubberDuckyofDoom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's over? So soon?!! (keep in mind, I read half of this in two days.) Well, it was a badass story!!
| Reviewed By: Mademoiselle Morte [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best Sango/Sesshoumaru stories i have found, this story actually got me into this pairing big time, thanks! I loved it, especially how you didn't suddenly turn Sess all fluffy, i like how you made him, a bit more aproachable but not all cutesy like, that would have just been scary. Very well done on a lovely piece!
| Title: It can't be over!!!
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Gives a standing ovation!!!) Thank you soo very much for such a wonderful,beautifully written story of two of the most interesting characters in Inuyasha! I have always admired the strength and courage of Sango,and you so did her justice...Sesshomaru has always intrigued me with his cool,aloof mysterious ways..and pairing these two together was just magical...I'll admit it...I laughed and cried in the course of reading,but I have so enjoyed the experience! Thank you so very much..I can't put into words how much I have enjoyed "Demon Slayer Sango". I always enjoyed getting the alert that the story was updated...Best wishes to you,and please let me know when you write again! One very happy and humble fan,Shaunda AKA Inu4ever!!
| Title: Wordless Praise
Reviewed By: Worth_waiting_for_ On: March 21, 2006 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aswome! Please continue and write more fics like this. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: adea neri On: March 17, 2006 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great a new chappy can wait to read.
| Title: Fantastic!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: AKA Inu4ever On: March 13, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been one of the most terrific Sesshomaru/Sango pairings that I have ever read!!! Thank you soooo much for such an awesome story!! I have bookmarked it so I can read and re-read it anytime I want! I can't wait for the last chapter!! Hooray!!!!
| Reviewed By: randomHime On: March 13, 2006 08:26 CST
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My favorite pairing cause its so ironic!! tHANX FOR THE HAPPY ENDING
| Reviewed By: Adea Neri On: March 12, 2006 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, i am enjoying it soo much. althought (MY)Sesshy is a bit OC i dont mind. Keep up the great work.
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