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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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"This is no different than before you went all stupid and decided that only Orochimaru could help you defeat Itachi!": He knows this isn't his Sasuke, yet he talks to him as he is his Sasuke and that he should understand what he's saying. Sasuke doesn't seem too concerned about finding HIS Naruto_he's going to continue going to classes and wait till the weekend to look into it. Did you not see these errors when you were writing? Did you hope we wouldn't see them? Did you not care about blatant errors in logic and plot? Don't understand how others didn't point this out to you. Maybe the ones that did; just didn't bother telling you.
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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So Naruto from the Konoha of the past wakes up in present day Tokyo. He doesn't know what a phone is, but he knows what a tv is. Sasuke asks where is kimono is-which, since it isn't actually his kimono and he doesn't remember this time, moving in, his clothes, etc...but he's able to tell Sasuke exactly where his (but not his) kimono is. He knows where everything in the bathroom is-but while he's in the bathroom he tells Sasuke he doesn't remember anything about them. That's pretty inconsistent and confusing. Why would he go to a dinner party with a Sasuke he doesn't know, in a time he doesn't know, to seee people he doesn't know and etc...He hasn't even told Sasuke where he's really from and what he does remember. The premise starts so falsely that it doesn't make me want to continue the story. I will read 1 more chapter (the 3rd) to see if you've explained the circumstances of what and how it happened.
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Reviewed By: sammiescruff [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 20:06 CDT
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i really liked that it was a good fic but is there a sequel cuz i think u left a kinda opening for a sequel with the he could get cured bit ???
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story. I'm happy it worked out like this in the end. I was one of the people who thought the last one was it, but I see I wasn't alone either. Great story. I really enojyed it!
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good ending. I'm almost sad to see it end. My heart goes out to Sasuke for his eyes, but I'm happy the other Sasuke got his Naruto back. I can't even begin to imagine how he must have felt to have lost Naruto twice. I'm glad they both found their happy ending. Great story!! I have to add it to my favorites! ~Duchess
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Reviewed By: SonikaKalia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 15:02 CDT
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Wow, breathtaking story, although I am dissapointed there wasn't any realy SasuNau sexiness. XD owell, I love it anyways. Thanks for the read.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 21:28 CDT
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That was a very good story. I really enjoyed it and the story was really surprising, but I still liked it. Great job.
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Title: Tokyo Sasuk
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever (not signed in) On: August 06, 2007 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i dont think i've ever hated Sasuke more, not that he's really quite sasuke, riiiiight? Shesh, i'm scared for Naruto! I mean like! OMG, he's gonna get raped by freakin tokyo sasuke! No, no, please dont let that happen! nO! You must update soon!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 19:09 CDT
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Naruto couldn't resist Sasuke's evil sexiness, not that I blame him for it! I can't wait for the next chapter. This one was great.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was pretty good and its getting even better can't wait till the next one.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 23:50 CDT
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Great chapter! Naruto finally realizes his feelings! i can't wait to see how this turns out. Please update it soon!
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, its been a LONG time since i felt bad for Sasuke. long time... and in this story i truely do feel sorry for him. If i were to loose naruto to another one of myself, omg, i freakin KILL the other me lol oh then again, its hard killing such a pretty girl (heheheh, conceited much? nah) but Naruto's wayyyyyy to cute! Everyone is paired with naruto, there so many crack pairings, and then there's this. yes, i feel bad for sasuke. it'd be one thing if it was sakura (he could kill her) it would be one thing if it was gaara (he would kill him and definately if it was neji) but being himself....AHHHH now i want to know! whats he gonna do?~!! sigh...idk if i can take this.
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Title: ....UPDATE
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't updated in so long! You must no it yourself, and...well gosh, I shouldn't be talking but, I had to reread almost every chapter cuz my memory sucks :( I really hope you update sooner. This is such a great story but I dont know if I can stand to wait that long again. To much suspense, ya know?? You write too good for your OWN good, lol. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm in love right now. and it's with this story. i'm really looking forward to your next update. :]
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 04:51 CDT
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That was a really good chapter. It really makes you wonder.
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