| "its time to choose kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: gfcgf
Reviewed By: tfdgfrf On: March 28, 2006 23:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also want a Hiei/Kagura pairing I think it 's cute.
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Title: ghhjj
Reviewed By: idot On: March 28, 2006 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want a Hiei/Kagura pairing
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: germanygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 06:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like kurama and kagome because i just do if u want an epal my email is alexandra.barnard@gmail.co
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Title: it rocks
Reviewed By: black dragon 115374 On: March 21, 2006 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are so grate I mean you are fantastike grand wonderful you are the best I love it dude
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Title: it rocks
Reviewed By: black dragon 11534 On: March 21, 2006 21:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are so grate I mean you are fantastike grand wonderful you are the best I love it dude
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sin 115276 On: March 21, 2006 21:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you where great I don't see why I should not give you a 10 if it went to 100 your rating would be 100 because you are so good at it.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sin 11546 On: March 21, 2006 21:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you where great I don't see why I should not give you a 10 if it went to 100 your rating would be 100 because you are so good at it.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: black death On: March 21, 2006 21:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are great I love it you should write a nother chapter you are great great job.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: devils angel On: March 21, 2006 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cool you are great I can not wait for the next chapter you are really good at this I love it
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Reviewed By: hotshorty On: March 21, 2006 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
go hiei/kag!!great so far more please
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Reviewed By: Tsuki-tora (not logged in) On: March 12, 2006 01:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far! I vote KurKag (Favorite pairing)YusKei and HieiKagura. Update asap! ^_~
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 23:43 EST
Comment/Review:
pllzzz rite k/h!
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Title: that is so cool
Reviewed By: devils angel 115 On: March 11, 2006 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is very cool and I want you to add more and it is fun to read you could add a charitar named angel
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Title: that is so cool
Reviewed By: devils angel 115 On: March 11, 2006 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is very cool and I want you to add more and it is fun to read you could add a charitar named angel
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Reviewed By: Conspiracy Is Fun On: March 11, 2006 20:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Bashes head into desk You have a pretty good idea going here, but you need to work on your material. Your grammar needs work. Remember, capitalize the first letter in names, and it also helps to spell the names right. You use dialogue, which is good, but you have to make sure you start a new paragraph when someone new is talking. The chapters shouldn't be one big paragraph, as the last one is, since it's rather daunting for a reader to see. White space makes a person want to read it more since it lookes easier. It also makes your chapters seem longer. You might also get more reviews if you DID make longer chapters, at least two pages on Word in 12 Times New Roman. Give imagery, tell us about the setting, since settings are very key. These are very simple tips, and, if you need to, get a credible beta reader who can help you enforce them. Oh, and asking for at least ten reviews isn't very fair or realistic. MM.org has particularly stingy reviewers. I would really love to see this story progess, especially if it's Hiei/Kagome, and become successful.
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