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 Title: Stronger
Reviewed By: The Devils Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 25, 2006 20:32 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like you fanfic an lot. Pleas don't stop writing. O I think she should be half elemental Fox, because of Shipo, and the ather half pike another readers youkai and mix it. And don't forget to make her short for Hiei. I hope you pike the Hiei/Kagome/Kurama-Youko pairing. Ok can't what to find out what happens bye. Pleas don't abandon this store. IT'S GOOD A 100.
 Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 23, 2006 16:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Hiei/kag/kur-youko X3
 Title: NICE!!!
Reviewed By: Leli  On: March 21, 2006 21:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i want a hiei and kagome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel nsi  On: March 09, 2006 05:58 CST
Comment/Review:
i can't remember but if ONE of the ppl have to be Hiei and just switch Hiei and Kurama's names with the exact same idea lol ^_^ good luck with your writting toodles!!
 Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel sni  On: March 09, 2006 05:56 CST
Comment/Review:
i like the way this is goin ^_^ really lol i do an i'm happy about the lengthened chapters as well. IN responce to your questions...i guess i wuould dsay Yusuke/Kagome/Kurama(youko) ^_^ not very many ot those and have Yusuke know about his Youkai form as well. Also for Kagome i think she should be an Inu-youkai. If seshomaru is changint her then she would automatically become an inu -youkai as well and then when she adopts shippo her mark would be on him branding him her son. She could have black hair with maybe one silve whirte streak in the front, and silver blue eyes with blue markings on her body abd black dog ears...i personally think this look for her would be awsome but that would be for you to deside ^_^...and to see what powers you give her as well heh. well i hope to see an update from you soon...ja ne!! ^_^
 Reviewed By: inukoro  On: March 01, 2006 02:42 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah i have to agree... hiei/kag/yus is the best option for me^^ i dont particularly mind what type of youkai though.
 Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 26, 2006 11:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Yusuke/Kagome/Hiei but as long os shes with Hiei I wont mind the pairing. Hmm... I think she should be a Shadow kitsune. That way it would be more logical for her to be Shippou's mother. Plus as a shadow elemental, she gets neat abilities like shadow jumping. Where you can travel through shadows. Also think her & Sesshomaru should develop a sibling like bond. LOVE THE STORY!!! UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE ^-^
 Reviewed By: Theresa  On: February 24, 2006 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i think kagome should be a white inu miko yokai its where she has miko powers but the abilitys and looks of a white dog like sesshomaru pairing yuskue/kagome my fave pairing in the world
 Title: duh!
Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14(not loged in)  On: February 24, 2006 12:42 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i votefor the Hiei/KAgome/Yusuke pairing, i've never seen one of those, also, i think she would want to be turned into a kitsune so that she could really be Shippo's mother, though, it is your chose, it is your fic after all, pick whatever type of demon you think she wasnts to be.
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879(NSI)  On: February 24, 2006 11:12 CST
Comment/Review:
you should do what pleases you most in your story not let others rule you otherwise it is not your work it is their work
 Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_karama_4ever31(not loggin)  On: February 23, 2006 20:30 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oops i mean yusuke/kagome/hiei Gomen
 Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_karama_4ever31(not loggin)  On: February 23, 2006 20:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i think kagome should be a half inu youkia and half kit. also the paring should be yusuke/kagome/karama-yoko
 Reviewed By: Azera_Vader [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2006 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story! I vote for the Hiei/Kagome/Kurama pairing! I think Yusk, would be a great older brother type figure for her.
 Reviewed By: going-SuperNova [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2006 08:04 CST
Comment/Review:
how about she is in the K9 family?? or in the cat family? and she could be a black animal
 Reviewed By: Hieis_soulmateis_Kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 22, 2006 18:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I think that Kagome should be the exact same kind of youkai that Hiei is, only make her use Ice more than Fire.
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