| "Alchemy and Saiyans" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Minied On: May 12, 2006 19:31 CDT
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It's great! Please give me more of this story. *been hooked with line and sinker*
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Reviewed By: Trunks lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 4 was so funny! Please postthe next chapter(s) I'm begging you!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 24, 2006 15:16 CDT
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Man chapter 4 was funny!! the way they talked back and forth and Ed completely ignored Roy and Al when Vegeta broke the GR. I also like the parts where you hear the clang. Anyway I dont hav any stories posted on this site cause i havnt been on here for a long time but ill post one soon. and just to tell u u mite not kno the one anime that im posting its called Juvenile Orion u hav to read the manga if u want to read my story its only five books but its a really good series.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 17, 2006 11:38 CDT
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This is really good keep it up and i think im ur only fan for now cuz i see that my last comment is still alone. well anyway does Ed show the DBZ's his automail arm and leg? and i cant wait to see the match between Yamcha and Ed! ^^
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 13, 2006 17:13 CDT
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dude u really need to update......this story is good! and to me i dont think u should hook Ed up with any of the DBZ girls cuz no one seems to fit him.......
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