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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] | Reviewed By: bille- san On: May 29, 2006 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! sorry i've not posted on this before, but i was just finishing up lots o' work, so i couldn't post... well anyways your fic is one of the best i've seen... oh, and thanks for the unbearable cliff on fiftynine. -thinks of cliff and shudders-... -then can't sleep- well, great story so far, keep up the really good postings. -sorry kind of hyperish.- ohkay byee! -thinks of own current state of mind...- O__o ***____insert user here****
| Title: Revision?
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Confusion!!! what was wrong with it? uh.......... im confused >.
| Title: I am so depressed now :(
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for writing, even though you had to stay up late at night to do so. I could tell that you were tired when you were writing it, by the infinitisimally lessened quality of vocabulary and content. Thank you for persevering. I am sooo depressed, just by reading this chapter (59). It all seems so inevitable, so unending. There is nothing InuYasha can truly do to get away . . . I, too, want to tear Naraku to shreds. InuYasha's not in heat, though, is he? Is Naraku obsessed with InuYasha, gay, or just a sadist who loves inflicting pain? How can he seriously believe that Sesshomaru will just let him have a love nest with InuYasha, using InuYasha as a pleasure source and brood mare? Sorry that I have so many questions - I guess I just seem to be in a contemplative sort of mood while I write this. The angst of this fic is practically killing me . . . but I love it all the same. Everyone needs a taste of that darkness, to remind themselves of how rapidly life can swing between happiness and extreme terror, sadness, and defeat. Can any romance and joy every truly create a product of "happily ever after" -ness? (sniff). I hope that Sesshy and InuYasha are fated to enjoy at least a bit more continuous periods of felicity in the greater expanse of their lives - I mean, Sesshy will live for a couple of thousand years, and InuYasha at least half of that, so they must have SOME joy in their lives. I would love to see their kids grow up . . . it would be a depressingly evil twist if InuYasha was rescued somehow, or managed to get away, and his daughter was left there with Naraku, and grew up tainted by the dark side, and came back and turned on InuYasha and Sessy . . . now THAT would really be a depressing, angsty ending. Did you put in the part about Naraku wanting more pups from InuYasha as a real possibility? More mPreg would be funny, but I don't think poor InuYasha needs more ties and liabilityes concerning Naraku and his evil plans of hell and deceit. Anyhow, I love the fic so far, etc, etc, but please get some more sleep before you try to write again . . . I hate to see gifted writing skills lag and suffer due to the exhaustion of the author. Ciao! ,*) (note the winking smiley)
| Title: O.O
Reviewed By: the amber dragonfly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 01:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... my.... BLOODY HELL. I am not a Sess/Inu pairing fan of ANY degree, yet I found myself staying up until one in the morning to finish what you've written so far! You have corrupted me!!! Not that it took much to corrupt me anyway... Your writing is superb- I can truly get into the story and the characters as you've portrayed them. And I really don't think ANYONE is OOC. I am truly amazed by your writing skills. I was deeply saddened that you handed poor Inuyasha off to that bastard Naraku again... shame on you! Let the poor hanyou have some happiness! Something, however, is telling me that perhaps the little girl is NOT Naraku's... perhaps we will see! I certainly hope she's Sesshy's pup after all. A million and a half gil to you for such a fantabulous story! Keep up the good work. (Is it bad of me to want you to continue a rape/incest/mpreg story???)
| Title: Crying
Reviewed By: FXL [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad why did poor Inuyasha have to get raped infront of his daughter like that!!??? Why is Naraku so cruel?? How is it that he is that low?? But I really enjoyed reading this chapter!! When I was going threw my email (I have like a hundred other stories I'm reading) I spotted this story and saw that it was updated and I jumped with glee and read it first before any other story!! I love this story so much and even though I hate that Inuyasha got rapped I know Sesshomaru will come and rescue him!! So Naraku better be expecting payback because it's coming his way!!! So I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope everything turns out all right for those two!! I'm sad now but I know happy times will be coming eventually!!!
| Reviewed By: Tai-san On: May 26, 2006 17:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for over riding my angst senses again. Not many people can do that. New chapter kicked major ass as always. Naraku is so naughty. Can't help it, I love it and I can't wait to see what evil you have planned for Inuyasha. hahahaha. Thanks again for working so hard for us. Awesome work.
| Reviewed By: Swanson23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, me again and stil lovin the story. I agree that the whole family should kill Naraku. But what's the fun in that? Sorry to say it, but it would be interesting to see Naraku's daughter get some siblings and see what they turn out like. I love your story, keep updating. And don't complain about you updaing after a long time, it takes me weeks before I update. Well, will review later and kepp it going, it's a great story.
| Reviewed By: Taisho On: May 25, 2006 00:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO, I guess that would be bad. I could be your body gaurd, you'd only have to pay with more chapters to your story. I get hungry, and you taste good.....wait.....that didn't come out right.......I ment the chapters taste good. I'm hungry. Feed me.
| Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah!! I was really ready for some butt raping! Gosh! n you have to cut it there >.< evilness Poor inuyasha, i hope sesshy gets there soon........... I don't think I like the idea of having inuyasha having puppies/baby spiderthingys that are narakus. sounds like an ugly outcome
| Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: May 24, 2006 14:56 EDT
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Of course I would still protect you! *Shock* Or my ostrich beating skills would go to waste! *Whispers conspiratorally* I once protected Tom Hanks against a horde of angry birds, you've got quality protection, no worries! And I am working on a spider beating course, so I can kill and hurt Naraku.
| Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: May 24, 2006 10:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good or rather bad considering the nature of the update... I'm not really going to be repeating myself here. But I hope you hurry up and update. Containing murderous rage towards your version of Naraku right now, but okay. As for myself, I don't know if you got the emails and all that... But I'm on hiatus. I sooo need a break. Please forgive what I did to Inu and Sess in FHI. I got evil there. Which reminds me of one little issue... Inu is going to get prego again huh?! Darn Naraku. Oh well... Let the angst begin. Tryst :-D
| Title: Chapter 59
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 09:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sob* My poor Inu. If I were in the room, he and I could dream up a long sequence of torture for Naraku. I hope that Tsukiko hurts him too. The inu line of blood is stronger than Naraku's. I think that Sesshoumaru is immune to Naraku's miasma. It could be another reason that Tsukiko may not be harmed by it. I hope she has something that she can hurt him with. Maybe the 'poison flower claws'. Keh, I just want the bastard to be in some serious pain. Well, a short chapter is better than none, I say. Good job. Snow
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 09:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon.
| Title: What Matter the Most
Reviewed By: darkfluffydag On: May 24, 2006 07:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story but who would had through the two brother would get together because of the father. by the way what the hee is up with the new update he not really going to ge inuyasha pup again is poor inuyasha who will he live thought this and will his mat save him it to. i love story like this! keep wait for next update.
| Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 17:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! You stopped!! I hope you update soon I love it soooooooooooooo much! Your an excellent writer!! Poor Sesshomaru... and the pups!! the pups will be okay... right? RIGHT!?!? I reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally hope Naraku doesn't rape Inu again...... that was really sad and a little disturbing... WAHHHHHHH!!!! You stopped and at such a great cliffhanger. I thought I was mean... You're just plain evil! :) lol! Please continue with your great and wonderful fanfiction! I have read umm... I think 'Someone To Hear You Scream,' and the little sequal thingys! It was great, but InuPapa was just a little scary lol! I think I like the original ending better than the alternative ending! Loooooooooooooooove your fanfiction please continue!! L8RZ! (^o^)/~ (I think this was the longest review I have ever written!! lol!)
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