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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter I love the pup's names. PLease up date soon.
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Title: uh oh... lol that was surprising.
Reviewed By: Tryst/ Punishment of the Inu On: April 29, 2006 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL... It seems that we think alike when it comes to naming names... LOL. Anyhow, I really enjoyed this chapter. Hehehe... I hope after your done with all the main stuff, we'll see something on the kids/pups. LOL. Off to go write some more. Sorry if it takes me a bit to update. Tryst.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 19:34 EDT
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I love the way Rin was added, even though you said summat about fathers picking the name (am I wrong there?)I am completely sure about you rambling, you get me reading rambles, and wooosh I can't stop ^^
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I guess its okay- for names. But how would you pronounce the females name *confused.* You messed up on the chapter thats up its 53 of something now 534 or w/e you have up.
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Reviewed By: skullz On: April 29, 2006 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha your funny. No It doesn't bother me for if it truelly did I wouldn't read it. So there is that and other than that I love the story so yea just go bout your business and chill. But keep them chappies coming. WOOOOOOOOO!!!
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Title: Great story!!!!
Reviewed By: FXL [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the last two chapters!! Naraku better not try to touch Inuyasha or his babies or I'll kill him...who am I kidding>_< (myself). I hope they end up ok I can't believe something bad would happen to the babies!! It was so cute how instead of feeding them with his nipples he fed them with his fingers!! And that naming them after a month is a way to make sure that their name is what they are like! Like my name it means bitter and I seem to be bitter most of my life except when I¡¯m reading stories that are as good as yours!! So as a closing I will say one last thing is that I love this story so much!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapters as always. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 17:47 EDT
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Hmm, I like your rambling, So you can ramble for me, yay! Good chapter
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Title: Cool... the names are coming.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 27, 2006 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. That was a funny chapter and I liked how the middle pup was behaving. Seriously though, your giving me ideas. Again. Thank you, for updating so soon. So, whats up for the family in the future? Is Naraku gonna make an appearance or oohhh. I just thought of something bad... Is it possible... nevermind. Wrong conclusion. Heehheehee. Update soon please. Tryst. Punishment of the Inu
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: April 27, 2006 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is freaking awesome. I stayed up all night reading it. I couldn't stop. I was a little disturbed about the male pregnancy thing at first but you wrote it very well. I love the detail and the emotion you put in to it. Please just tell me the little girl has a chance at not being evil. Awesome job please update again soon.
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Title: Thank You!
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, I am amazed and gratified at the time and detail that you devoted to replying to my questions and comments. It is gratifying to receive so much attention! Chapter 52 wrapped up some lose ends and answered the musings of Naraku's twisted mind, which were both things that needed to be addressed, so thanks! By the way, I was inspired after reading this fanfic, and began to write the first installment of my own. It is now up on mediaminer, and is called "The End of Innocence". But please don't read it (at least, not yet), because I need to reformat it into the fanfic paragraphing style (it is done in a more traditional paragraph format, like an english essay). Do you have any advice for me to make my fanfic more like a fanfic, with the right kind of paragraphing and breaks for dialogue? Whoa, wandering off topic. Back to your fic. I am really interested to see how Naraku can imagine being able to kidnap or in any way steal the pups from InuYasha - I would think that InuYasha and Sesshomaru would be smart enough to keep them out of harm's way. One run-in with a crazed demon-rapist should be enough for anybody! Another point that I would like to bring up: thanks for the vocabulary sections at the end of the chapters. I hate it when a fanfic includes vocabulary that I don't know, and then I have to look it up in the Japanese dictionary at school . . . I wish that I could read Japanese, and I would like to learn someday. Do you speak/read/write Japanese fluently? Anyway, that is plenty of questions to bother you with for now - I hope that you don't mind. Oh, and by the way, my sister, LadyOrange, says hi. She is obsessed with "Chained", but refuses to read this fic because it is yaoi. Bye! Maelia8
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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*clucks tongue n crosses arms across her chest* disapointment.... Here I expected a 30min to read chapter and I get a 5 miniter... :| Mostly reviews man.... >.< you should just email us the responses. >.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 18:07 EDT
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Oh he's evil! Virtual pocky is good enough for me! Thanks for the tenterhook explaination, everyone uses that phrase and I wonder who actually knows...anyway, another good chapter, please update soon!
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Title: Hehehe. Bad Naraku.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 26, 2006 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehe. Naraku is going to be in sooo much trouble. And ten to one... The Inu Clan is on to him. Hehehe. At least, I hope they are. Do you plan on intigrating Sounga? Or perhaps Demon InuYasha? If not both? Sorry. I watched the 3rd movie again and Now I'm obsessed all over with the dire possibilities of that combonination versus Naraku. Okay. That was a good chapter. Though I'm feeling sorry for Inuyasha again. Hope he tears nara's throat out. Don't tell my beta I said that. Anyhow... Update soon. Punishment of the Inu/Tryst
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Title: Nursing
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: April 24, 2006 12:57 EDT
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Baby deamons nurse on blood.....oh man! Given the right hormones, human males can produce milk....couldn't there have been something like that for poor Inu. First he almost bleeds to death during the birth and now the poor infants are going to suck him dry....unless Sess can help too. Don't get me wrong, I have greatly enjoyed this story and I still do, it is just that blood is a little icky for babies in my brain. I was relieved that Sess finally took the little girl into his arms. I was really worried for a minute that he would refuse.... But now comes the issues with Naraku huh? Thanks for writing! Caitriona
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